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Re: Frostbit
Love, love, love love it. This is amazing and very "wintery" poem. It gets me more excited for Christmas and winter. I have nothing else to say, but just "amazing". ...
Nov 19, 2014 -
Re: Act of Betrayal
Really nice! I love this piece of poem, even though it's not finished yet. The words are very deep and dramatic, which I am always looking for in every poem ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Photograph.
Lovin' the dramatic tone here.. Good use of the phrase "ticking of the clock." I used the same phrase too in one of my poems.. As I'm reading your poem, ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: After all..
This is fantastic. It's short, but still great. I love it. The words were great and awesome. I love the fact that you ended your poem with a question. I ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Ode to an Orchid
Wow. Sound sweet. Your poem is great. I love it. Even though it is short, the message was clear and perfect. It shows the love and appreciation of the nature. ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Yet Another YWS Birthday Poem
Happy birthday YWS! I am new here, since I only started registering to YWS this week, but I would love to say that since the first day that I registered ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: On Birthdays
This is just amazing. All the things you have said on your poem were true. Every year we go through tough times and good times and those are the memories ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Sometimes
All I can say is that this poem is amazing as hell. So dramatic, which I loved. I love the story behind this poem too. It caught my attention right ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Beautiful Girls
This is amazing! I love the your overall appreciation toward girls. The way you wrote your poem was exactly the same as mine. I also love putting the "Oh, how ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: Brains
Amazing! I love the way you initiated your poem. I also love the overall theme or purpose of your poem. It made sense and very entertaining. In addition, I love ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: I loathe you.
I love this piece of poem. It's funny with all of those crossed out phrases.. I see that you're being realistic, but you're trying to hide your "realistic-ness" by crossing ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Vex. (Draft #1)
All I can say is that I love the drama of this piece. I admire your dramatic words and phrases. The dialogues were greatly used, as well. There is no ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Please look.
Totally amazing! Oh my gosh. I loved it. :) I was smiling the whole time, while reading this piece. It was such a great hook for the audience. I love ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Sovereignty
So emotionally dramatic. I loved this. You did a great job! I love the adjectives that you've used in your poem. It made sense. Also, the words were deep and ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Another Dead Man Walking
I love this piece of poem that you made. Amazing! It sounded great in my mind and also it made sense. I admire the fact that you have chosen the ...
Nov 12, 2014
