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Re: jupiter wishes
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: Wow! This is very unique. You have an AMAZING handle on personification, and I can't help but feeling like ...
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Re: Existential
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - I can definitely see some Christian values in this, which is amazing
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Re: So I Will Pretend Forever.
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - This feels like a chapter from a prose story. I love when poetry seems to ...
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Re: flowers on gravesites
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! (You've posted a lot of poems, so I'm hoping I get to read all of them today). Let's dive in: The Good ...
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Re: Bug on the wall
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! (I read your latest poem and it was stunning, so I know this one will be just as great
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Re: Eyes of Peridot
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: There isn't much to say about this poem, but everything I do have to say about it is good. ...
Jul 26, 2024 -
Re: Hysteria-- Chapter 1 pt 2
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: Randomness While Reading - The name Mr. Azazel is fire - I don't know why but this reminds me ...
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Re: Lunar Mars Colony
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - I like how there's an excerpt at the beginning- it makes this read unique and ...
Jul 25, 2024 -
Re: Hysteria--Chapter 1
Hi, Rae! I read all of the 'Taken' chapters so now I know this is gonna be good (P.S., I'm still waiting for another chapter of those. They're literally so ...
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Re: How Long Will I Wander?
Wow, Ellie! This is a great poem! I think this poem is very relatable in terms of how we carry around sins. I also love the references to Eve and ...
Jul 25, 2024 -
Re: chores while housesitting
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - Your writing style is introspective. I really feel like I'm inside of the character's thoughts. ...
Jul 24, 2024 -
Re: Streetlights
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! The Good Stuff Okay, this poem feels very ominous and dark (which I've always been a sucker for). It reminds me of ...
Jul 24, 2024 -
Re: i sobbed at your kitchen table, you held me
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! This is a pretty short poem so I won't be too long. Let's dive in: The Good Stuff -Wow, you have a ...
Jul 23, 2024 -
Re: Child-Sized Hole In My Chest
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! The Good Stuff - Okay, this is awesome. You have wonderful vocabulary, and the figurative language is amazing. When I saw the ...
Jul 23, 2024 -
Re: Ch-3: Dick's Class
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - You know those TV shows like 'The Great British Baking Show' or 'Peter Rabbit' where ...
Jul 23, 2024
