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gruzinkerbell

In their hearts humans plan their course, but the LORD establishes their steps.

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: jupiter wishes

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: Wow! This is very unique. You have an AMAZING handle on personification, and I can't help but feeling like ...

    Jul 26, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Existential

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - I can definitely see some Christian values in this, which is amazing

    Jul 26, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: So I Will Pretend Forever.

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - This feels like a chapter from a prose story. I love when poetry seems to ...

    Jul 26, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: flowers on gravesites

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! (You've posted a lot of poems, so I'm hoping I get to read all of them today). Let's dive in: The Good ...

    Jul 26, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bug on the wall

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! (I read your latest poem and it was stunning, so I know this one will be just as great

    Jul 26, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Eyes of Peridot

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: There isn't much to say about this poem, but everything I do have to say about it is good. ...

    Jul 26, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Hysteria-- Chapter 1 pt 2

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: Randomness While Reading - The name Mr. Azazel is fire - I don't know why but this reminds me ...

    Jul 26, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Lunar Mars Colony

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - I like how there's an excerpt at the beginning- it makes this read unique and ...

    Jul 25, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Hysteria--Chapter 1

    Hi, Rae! I read all of the 'Taken' chapters so now I know this is gonna be good (P.S., I'm still waiting for another chapter of those. They're literally so ...

    Jul 25, 2024
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Narrative Re: How Long Will I Wander?

    Wow, Ellie! This is a great poem! I think this poem is very relatable in terms of how we carry around sins. I also love the references to Eve and ...

    Jul 25, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: chores while housesitting

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - Your writing style is introspective. I really feel like I'm inside of the character's thoughts. ...

    Jul 24, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Streetlights

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! The Good Stuff Okay, this poem feels very ominous and dark (which I've always been a sucker for). It reminds me of ...

    Jul 24, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: i sobbed at your kitchen table, you held me

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! This is a pretty short poem so I won't be too long. Let's dive in: The Good Stuff -Wow, you have a ...

    Jul 23, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Child-Sized Hole In My Chest

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! The Good Stuff - Okay, this is awesome. You have wonderful vocabulary, and the figurative language is amazing. When I saw the ...

    Jul 23, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Ch-3: Dick's Class

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - You know those TV shows like 'The Great British Baking Show' or 'Peter Rabbit' where ...

    Jul 23, 2024


Every really new idea looks crazy at first.
— Alfred North Whitehead