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Re: Penny Lane
Wow, in some way I feel I can relate to this all too well. This was very moving to me somehow. The flow was excellent. Not too difficult to interpret. ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: ~Weathered
This was good. Like the metaphors in this. Sounds like a poem about a lost love.
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: The Panic Attacks
I liked this a lot. It was very beautifully written. Kind of reminds me of something I wrote a long time ago. I also liked how it went from being ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: "My World," Poem 2
I like it. The first part kind of reminded me of "Where the Wild Things Are." The second part with the girl reminded me of some morbid love story. Overall, ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Just Leave.
Not bad, just a little too short I thought. It could be a lot longer. There is a part here that I'm not quite sure of. "Not a graze in ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Raison de L'insomnie
This was good. It flows nicely. Plus, I don't think it needs to be any longer. It's good the way it is and it's to the point.
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: [In]Sane
Loved it, very haunting. Had a very eerie feeling to it. I felt as though I could relate in some way. Good job
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Young Old Wise Fool
It kind of made sense upward, until the third stanza, or should I say second stanza? Oh well, it could use a bit more, but then again, it also works ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Fair-weather Friend
I can totally relate on both ends. This was good. The flow was nice. I especially liked how it kind of went from calm to angry. Good job.
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: May
Loved the imagery in this. Very mysterious as always. Lots of dark description. Good job
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The Voice
Thank you all for the reviews. This poem was actually nine years in the making. It's based on something that happened to me when I was sixteen. It was a ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: ded men
Lol! Sorry to laugh. You really took a chance here. This can be interpreted in many different ways. That's one of the things I like about it. Way to go ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Highway
Interesting formatt, it's short, but very rarely styled. I imagine that the words highway, alive, and heart are meant to be said in a whisper or a distant voice, like ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Half Asleep
Thanks for the review. I know it doesn't really have a very poetic formatt. I literally wrote it late at night when I was having one of my insomnia episodes. ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: She stared at the rain.
Sounds a lot like my poem "Voices", except a lot less dark. Can't wait to read the second part.
Apr 20, 2011