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Re: A Quiet Celebration
Hello, happy review day! I love this poem! The descriptions are beautiful:D Each word and line in each nicely written stanza rolls off the readers tongue. Whenever you put a ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: FLY
Hello, happy review day! I love this poem, I find that there are many meanings to it, so I'll go through a couple. Inspiration This poem has a very inspirational ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Tainted Warrior by ScarletDreams14
Hello, happy review day! This is a beautiful poem which strikes me at my core as a reader. By using free verse you create a personal feel for the poem ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Poison and Passion
Hello, happy review day! This is a very interesting story that gripped me at the first line. You use very descriptive language throughout and an interesting narrative that the reader ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: The siren's Call
Hello, happy review day! I really liked the story that trailed behind this at the beginning. It was a very interesting piece to read. By using the greek gods and ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: The Many Forms of Love
Hello, happy review day! I love how calm this poem makes me feel. The story telling tone that rides a long with the ideas of love creates a beautiful music ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Sharp Words
Hello, Happy review day. I love how this is short and sweet :D It makes the reader re-read it as they think and think about the message you trail behind ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Shannon (Part One)
You, my friend, just gave me an existential crisis. I feel this hasn't got reviews yet as the chapter looks very long, when actually, it's just a lot of paragraphs. ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Drinking Song No. 3
Hello, happy review day! To begin with, I like how relaxed and commercial the tone of the poem is as the speaker rants about his life. In the first stanza, ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: A Christmas Song: Christmas Past [a modern adaptation of Dickens' 'A Christmas Carol']
Hello, Happy review day! I hardly ever see scripts on YWS so I was very intrigued to read it. I'm sorry if this is a bad review as I have ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Crisis of Faith.
I love how it starts off! The way you repeat the idea of different ways of naming 'it' grips the reader and drags them in. Using this technique really effects ...
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: Don't Call Him Out
Hello, this is a very strange yet interesting poem where the reader is left thinking about the message behind it. I only have a few nitpicks so I'll say them ...
Dec 14, 2014 -
Re: Stargaze
Hello! Wow, I love this poem, the imagery is amazing! (I have nothing to do at the moment so I'm going to go through detail). First of all, I love ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: Summer
I love the imagery you use in this poem! I can almost feel the silence. It's interesting how you describe the summer as something that could be bad; completely contrasting ...
Nov 25, 2014 -
Re: Little YWS Turns Ten
Awww that's such a sweet little story! I love how you describe YWS as a little person as it gives a personal side to the entire website. At the beginning ...
Nov 14, 2014
