ghostie

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I quite like the format of this poem. The first three stanzas, that is. Quite innovative. I also like the consistency of the group of threes - burns, kills, turns; ...

I find it oddly coincidental that one of my first non-rhyming poems is in a similar format to this. I, too, like rhyming poems, and was dabbling in free-verse. Anyway, ...

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At first, I was intent on not liking this poem, but I actually quite like it. The reason being for my distaste at the start is because of the rhythm, ...

I cannot say I understand this poem or even that I like this poem as a poem. But what I can say is that the imagery is lovely. I am ...

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This is quite convoluted. Philosophically convoluted. But I am not saying that this is a terrible thing. I do quite like this as it is. The narrator reminds me of ...

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