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at least the another half is good to keep me reading." ~my mind Hi. First, is this a first draft? This chapter is simply filled with good points but all ...

Hi, Umm, RubyRed may I asked who are you before you became RubyRed? Weird question anyway, lol. SO everyone likes a good poem, and so is me. I like this ...

Hi, I love the developing of the poem here. It was a little different from what I'd expected and that is a good thing as a writer. You did a ...

Hi, I certainly like this poem. I like the messages inside of this poem dearly much although obviously, I don't really like the ending, but that's a personal preference. *** ...

Hi, And this is going to be my first debut review for this year, so I think it'll be a little rusty. Sorry in advance. *** You lock the door ...

Hi, I think it is called senryu. I am sorry for not able to write a proper review, but this And this Both of them are the best pages from ...

Hi, I don't want to comment much on this poem, but as if with every poems, they can be improved and keep improving. I still love to read this kind ...

Hi, This poem addresses some quite interesting thing. It's a little funny, but sometimes, sad. Ironic as people said. I've never known where is Brooklyn (only heard about it) and ...

Hi, Wow... This poem is so amazing. I don't know how I could avoid this earlier when you published this, so shame on me not finding this treasure. And I'm ...

Hi, This poem's centered around a very good and unique topic, and that's death. This kind of topic isn't really quite rare, but you did a good job conveying your ...

Hi, I shall now kill myself by writing a review to you. This poem is a little bit hard to read especially it touches a topic that I don't really ...

Hi, It's interesting to see people experimenting on haiku and I like to write haiku myself, but I'm not quite good at this haiku thing. ** A friend told me ...

Hi, I'm back to review your poem. I missed your poems. ^_^ Hmm, this piece is much more better than your first one. I can see your improvements by each ...

Hi, I admit your poem is so subtle. The meaning of this poem gently appears one by one like the soft snows that fall in evening. However, the thing is ...

Hi, Perfection is a goal for everyone, but we should go beyond it. I really love that you're making this poem for your friends. Every act of kindness won't go ...