fruityfortissimo

Fruity again! Okay seriously I LOVE this story! I keep reading and every time I just want to read more! And I can't be sure but I think I know ...

Hey! Me again! Once again I am impressed. I love what you're doing with the character, but I think she could have a bit more depth. If this was just ...

Hey its fruity! Okay once again I want to know more. This is a very captivating story thus far. Only thing I have with this part is what captaindomdude said, ...

Hey fruity here! Okay, already from the beginning I'm hooked. I can tell from the immediate danger that this is going to be a great story, and I absolutely cannot ...

Jashy, that was truly amazing. You are an extremely talented singer, songer writer, guitarist, etc haha you're amazing and that song was beautiful

OH MY GOD THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D

Hello there. I feel is poem has a lot of potential, but it needs more detail. It isn't exactly simple, it just is missing a lot. Try expanding it, and ...

WOW! Girl this rocked! I really like how it was very simple, but at the same time it left the poem open for interpretation. And those who wear their hearts ...

This poem was good. It was very innocent. I sit in the seat across from him on the bus, His best friends surrounding him. His hair falls in his face ...

Inside the cave, Good hook. is a creature you fear. Kind of cliche. Maybe you could replace 'fear' The image is with you now freezing you in horror. Awesome! You ...

Hey! THis is a nice poem. Raw! My blood is cold. Nice opening! Hooks the reader! The room is black. The tears run down my face like razor blades. Hmmm....I ...

This was a good poem. I like the general idea, and I think it flowed well except it certain places. Like darkness flees from the light, one glance at you ...

It's raining again. Nice. Simple, but it sets the tone for the poem. Why do I feel so sad when it rains? This line doesn't really sound good. Its saying ...

Oh my God. This poem is simply beautiful. I honest to God started crying when I read this. I can definetly relate in a way. I hope that one day ...

This poem was really sweet. It was innocent and kind of sorrowful, but it also had a side of acceptance in who you are. One glance from across the room ...