flyinginvisible

I think it's pretty hard to be a bad poet. Poetry, to me, is anything you want it to be, pretty much. Anyway. To the point! I'm not sure if ...

I love this. What inkwell said about the missing 'y' I agree on, but I like the poem just how it is. THIS is why I'm a bad critic. Ah ...

I liked this. Good meaning, it's real. I'd suggest punctuation. Everybody loves grammatically correct poems, right? To start, there was one mis-spelling I caught, a couple M.I.A. commas, and some ...

I love this. This will be a crappy review because I don't really have anything I want to critique here. haha. embrace the now not its shadow. I agree with ...

I can picture it perfectly, which I really love. Kudos to that. I'm not sure I like how it's all pretty much one big run-on, but I don't think you ...

I like it. I'd suggest adding punctuation, though, if you want. I think it adds more to everything. :D That you face is a canvas your? Into mature's maze do ...

I. Love. This. I don't really know what else to say. I think towards the end, where you say, If a boy is nearby, I hope he don't stare. the ...

I really like this. I sort of agree with MiRaCLeS about the 'too short' thing, but if you feel that it's complete, I don't think there's a need to add ...

I agree with most of what icanbefixed said. Just some repetitive wording in there. Overall, I liked it. Poetry, to me, is almost anything, and this is most definitely a ...

I really liked this. The ancient tribes bit made me stumble, because I couldn't think of ancient tribes with guns, but it fits with the gist of this, and there ...

I liked it. I agree with what has been said, you just need to work out some grammatical errors. Putting all of that aside, I wasn't really clear on what ...