fleuralplants

Hello! So, I have only read one other chapter of this, so this review is mostly going to be related to grammar things and little things that I noticed in ...

Hi! This is going to be a short review, but I enjoyed reading this. Here are some things I noticed: Suggestions: To start, I noticed that you used 'were' rather ...

Hi! This is going to be a rather short review, but here we go. I absolutely loved this poem, it was very calming to read. I love the way that ...

Hi! This is going to be a rather short review, but here we go. Suggestions: 1) I noticed that you said quick cold reply I think maybe saying "she gave ...

Hi! Suggestions: For starters, when you said chores – homework – people I need to speak to. I don't think that the dashes were an effective way of going through ...

Hi! I haven't read the previous chapters, so this review is going to pertain to this chapter only and will be fairly short. For starters, I noticed that you said ...

Hi! This is going to be a fairly short review but I really enjoyed reading through this. I prefer version A over version B. I think it flows more easily ...

Hi! I really liked this! It's short and sweet. I love the way that you described things, It had watched as the humans spent the days on the yellow sands, ...

Hi! Anyway, I love the way that you use metaphors in this short story. red wine lips and The butterflies in my stomach morphs into bees. These are such interesting ...

Hi! This is going to be a little short, so I apologize in advance. I really like this poem, even if I don't quite understand all of it. I'm just ...

Hi! I think that starting the chapter mid-action was productive in this case. It helps to capture the reader's attention and hook them in for the rest of the chapter. ...

Hi! I like the title. Upon immediately reading it, I assumed it was a grammatical error, but it made so much more sense once I actually delved into the story! ...

Hi! While reading, I noticed some grammatical errors, so here they are: 1) Nothing got rid of them,not the therapy not the meds. There should be a space between the ...

Hi! I like the opening to this chapter. Introducing the reader to the chapter mid-action can be useful in capturing the reader's attention, and I think using words to describe ...

Hi! This was a fun read. First, I noticed some grammar errors: When you say "miss Potts", the M should be capitalized, since Miss Potts is being used as her ...