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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Allegheny Girl

    Hi! I really enjoyed this poem. The repetition reminds me of a folk song, and that's common with old-timey poems but not something I have seen on this website before! ...

    Jun 11, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: my prayer of going nowhere (goes nowhere)

    Hi! This was a really interesting and thought-provoking read. For starters, I love the idea of this poem. My interpretation (which may be totally wrong) is of the extremity of ...

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: A Creeping Gas Stove Ballad

    Hi! This poem was really interesting. It's really creative, and I'd certainly never think to make a poem about a stove. I love the fact that you made this poem ...

    Dec 26, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Leonardo da Vinci

    This poem is beautiful. The vocabulary used and the way you arranged the words is sophisticated and makes for a beautiful poem. I don't know much about Leonardo da Vinci, ...

    Jul 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Older

    I absolutely loved this poem. It perfectly describes nostalgic longing for childhood, and how things change over time. The rhyming really helps to tie the poem together. I was a ...

    Jul 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Technology, Narrative Re: fuel economy

    Hi! I really enjoyed this poem and I found it to be very relatable. I think the use of 'boxes' in this poem was rather creative, especially with the last ...

    Dec 20, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: i am

    Hi! This is just going to be a super short review, but here it is! I absolutely loved this poem. It is empowering, yet devastating and tragic, at the same ...

    Mar 24, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: shutting down internal server

    Ahaha okay even though this is just about Minecraft, I love it so much. It's cool how you managed to make a poem about a video game actually... meaningful? Deep? ...

    Jan 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Imposter

    Hey! This is just going to be a short, messy review, but here it is! I love that this rhymes. Rhyming always ties everything together. I love the idea behind ...

    Jan 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: .

    Hi! This is going to be a very short review, but here it is! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It is short and to the point, and I appreciate that. ...

    Nov 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Stage

    Hi! Here is a short review! First of all, I really enjoyed this poem. It transported me into the scene of being backstage, even though that is something I have ...

    Nov 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: numb (tw)

    Hi! This is going to be a VERY short review, but here it is! Wow. I really liked this poem- It was raw and emotional, and I think you did ...

    Nov 22, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: repentance

    Hi! This is going to be a rather short review, since I don't really have much to say about it! I really enjoyed this poem. This is such a raw ...

    Nov 14, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Instructions

    Hi! Wow! I absolutely loved this. This reminds me of a lot of Hozier's songs, and I feel like there is a similar theme among them. I really appreciated the ...

    Nov 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: Please Help Me

    Hey! This is just going to be a short review, but here it is. I really enjoyed this, even if it is so raw and vulnerable. I related to a ...

    Nov 11, 2020


I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled.
— Liminality