fireheartedkaratepup

Hm. Very short and sweet. I like it. I see you staring at me Trying to figure out what's wrong I know it's always hard to see What keeps me ...

Not completely sure about the title, since you seem to have more than one religion featured here, but.... I don't think I can figure out a better one for you. ...

...I'm a little confused. Is the person remembering something? Or is he imaging something? Is he imaging he remembers something? Or is it a lost memory? Although it might fit ...

She says the world ' s a scary place -- Of candid horrors; shockingly grotesque Pretty good, but some typos. A pretty theory though dilapidated, What? There's nothing seperating this ...

I now see why others quote the entire poem in their reviews. It doesn't show up in box down below!:smt091 (It's because there's two pages, but I'd still like to ...

YO! ....I meant to review this earlier. XP He knows almost everything about me. My name, my beliefs, where I go to school, Who's my crush, my mom and what ...

:shock: :smt119 :smt091 :smt104 :smt103 And also, >.< .....I'm only reviewing this because y'all are my friends. I really, really hate zombies. Nevertheless, this was very well-written. Your styles bl

First: Since this is a writing site, and you're not submitting the cover for reviews, either hid it in a spoiler or don't show it all. It's somewhat distracting. (That, ...

I hit the "Happy" button on the poll just to annoy you. XD Overall, this was pretty good. It's needs some polishing, though, so I'm gonna get into that. As ...

Oh CRAP no. That did NOT just happen. I deleted, like, 1,000 characters. >.< What I was saying was, it's easy to fall into the trap of over-describing things. Like, ...

I think I might love this, but I'm not sure. There was a truce in your hands, nails blue, soothing my inflamed skull while snow drift conversations blew into my ...

Sooooooooo many fragments........ #.# Haha don't worry, it's something that's very common and easy to fix with commas, hyphens, colons, semicoolons, and the like. (But don't overextend-- then you'll e

"I don't even" made me :lol:. XD The impossibility of a horizon is a bleeding nightmare, a tornado gasping between pillars of fire, fluctuating, ripping at charred roots like sinews ...

Hm. Overall, this was nice. Short, sweet, simple. However, I can't help but think that there's so much more to this than you've written here. For instance, I like the ...

............you do know that the deadline for the contest is June 1st, right? (I'm in it too.) I remember quite well how humans from across the galaxies shuttled down in ...