fight4whatisright

Hey there! Fighta here for a review First off, I liked the way you set the story with that first bit. It was well-written and I really got a feel ...

Hi there! I’m Fighta. Well, your writing style is certainly effective. I'm hooked. Nitpicks: "They have sent a bird, the Emperor demands that you stand down and obey his orders." ...

Hi there! I’m Fighta. Interesting work you have here, but maybe a little uneventful. I haven’t read any previous chapters so I can’t say much about plot or what little ...

Hi there! Fighta here as requested. Interesting work you have here. I’ll break my review up into different headings to cover all aspects of your writing to try and be ...

Hi there, I specialise in stories rather than lyrics, but I'll try to review this as best I can. The introduction is lacking in rhythm in every second line. It ...

Hi there So this was amazing. It was beautifully written, every sentence seemed so meaningful and poignant. Impressive imagery, and it seems like there's a very good plot behind it ...

Hi there This is really good because it captured my interest and made me want to know what's going on, which is key to getting readers to read the rest ...

Hey. This is really quite good. I havent read anything before this, but I certainly want to now. Even though nothing much happened, it had me interested. The characters were ...

Wow, this is really good. The description is not too fancy, which is actually great because everythings really clear. Even though the piece really short (which is perfectly fine for ...

This speaks to me so loudly and deeply on so many levels. I used to be one of those people; not judging - just unable to understand. But I learned ...

oh... my... gosh.... this was beautiful!! i have a tear in my eye the rhyming scheme was great! i cant think of anything to say thats bad about this my ...

whoooaaa awesome poem dude!! all of it is totally true, I'm right there with you. nice flow & rhythm & rhyme. I like both versions, they both speak the truth ...

this was pretty beautiful, but i have a problem with the consistency of the rhyme. in some stanzas the second line rhymes with the last, in others they don't. that ...

haha i liked it! He raced over to his trunk, opened it and took out a folded piece of parchment. He didn’t bother to clean up the mess that he ...

WHOA!!! that was awesome!!! you have some real talent. if you, like, record yourself singing this and put it on youtube or something, send me the link so i can ...