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The Seven Tribes of Megalonia

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 14

    Thank you so much for the review. :D I certainly did put a lot into this chapter. I loved building the Ghost Talon community. It just wasn't present in the ...

    Jun 1, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 14

    Thank you so much for your review. This chapter gave me trouble for some reason. It did not want to be written. Lol.

    Jun 1, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 13

    Thank you for the review. I didn't get a notification for this for some reason. Was checking on the chapter and there was your review. Yay for me! :D I ...

    May 28, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 13

    Thank you so much for the review. :D The Antelosaurs are a new creature I created. I need to ask @FlamingPhoenix if she can make a drawing of them.

    May 28, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 12

    Thank you so much for your review. I've been looking forward to it all day. :D Oh yes...the ice talons definitely suck...not Felistia of course...but her sister....terrible You had me ...

    May 27, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 12

    Thank you for your review. You've got a good point in regards to the first part feeling rushed. I didn't realize that until now. I'll have go back and correct ...

    May 26, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 11

    Thank you so much for the review. I love hearing your thoughts on it. I shows me if I've written the chapter in a way that impacts the reader correctly. ...

    May 25, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 10

    Thank you so much for the review. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I didn't really set out to make this story what it is when I first started ...

    May 25, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 8

    Thank you so much for all your reviews. You're going through this quickly. :D As for the drawing that FlamingPheonix does, sometimes I have a very clear idea, but most ...

    May 24, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 4

    Thank you so much for your reviews. They were a delight to read. I'll have to go back over them when I come around to editing these chapters as you ...

    May 23, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 10

    Thank you for the review. I'm so sad that you had to read this, but at the same time so happy that you thought it was well written. The previous ...

    May 23, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 1

    Thank you again for your review. I can see what you mean about some characters getting more development that others and how I should try to make each distinct as ...

    May 22, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Prologue

    Thank you so much for the review. I like your incites on what I should change and I'll definitely check back and edit them in when I come back to ...

    May 22, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 9

    Thank you so much for your review. I'm so sorry you had to read through this again. I was tearing up while writing it.

    May 22, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 1

    Thank you so much for the review. I'm so glad you like the characters and world building so far. You had a good point in regards to the paragraph where ...

    May 21, 2021


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