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Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 4)
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Either way, Sonya knew that she could trust this farm boy with her secret, so she ...
Sep 8, 2016 -
Re: The Two Brothers (part 1)
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Albern's thick, brown hair as he gathered his scabbard. Just a note for while your writing ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Nocturnal Lights
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I The headlights of nocturnal vehicles form a train; a conga line of people still awake. ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Band is Family
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Story plot: This was a very uplifting story and the ending just made me smile. ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: Blue Willow (unfinished)
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Green was finally prominent, unparalleled to the brittle brown that encompassed the soil, and the engulfing ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: 1-Write a will
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Okay so this was an interesting way to start a story on the whole, but ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: snowglobe -edited-
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks i think it was one of those desires that are always this strange knot of half ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 3)
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “May I ask where you’re taking me?” Sonya inquired, who had followed the gentleman in silence ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 2)
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Chapter plot: Wow so the story plot just sky rocketed. You've just introduced a supposedly ...
Sep 4, 2016 -
Re: Why I Sit in the Rain
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Theme: Wow that was quite a heavy theme there. It's not every day that I ...
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 1)
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Note: Long time, no see. I see that you've changed up your story. Let's see how it ...
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: The High Seas: What the Heart Lost
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks The lad that stood in front of the court held his head high in the air. ...
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: Under the Vast Expanse CH 1
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I slid into a black van full of cardboard boxes. Okay so I just wanted to ...
Sep 2, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks It went like this. I don't think this is the best way to start a story. ...
Sep 2, 2016 -
Re: Dresses and Politics Part 2: Chapter 10
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Chapter plot: Okay so this chapter really wasn't long enough in my opinion and felt ...
Sep 1, 2016