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Re: The New World
Hi ConcernedGreek, Felistia here with a short review. Wow, the opening paragraph is magnificent and paints a perfect picture in my mind. The over all story is boring, but my ...
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Re: Blue
Hi Lissa, Felistia here with a short review. Interesting poem, it catches my eye as soon as I start to read it. The title isn't as eye catching, but that's ...
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Re: Color
Hi tigeraye, Felistia here with a short review. Cool story. I love that the description starts off colourful and slowly fades to grey. The way you give a sense of ...
Nov 2, 2015 -
Re: another story
Hi Felistia here with a short review. At first I was confused about what you were writing about, but after a little while it started to make sense and became ...
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Re: Sadness
Hi Felistia here with a short review. I love this poem! The emotion in it is great and I really like that you described the different forms of sadness. The ...
Nov 1, 2015 -
Re: untitled no. 4
Hi Felistia here with a short review. I really like this poem even though it is short. You capture the emotions very well and I love the way you used ...
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Re: Peaceful Observations
Hi Felistia here with a short review. Wow this is a great piece of writing. The description in here is wonderful. The words you use are very colourful. My favourite ...
Oct 31, 2015 -
Re: Twisted Whispers
Hi Felistia here with a review. Nice idea and by the way the title is very good. It made me want to read the poem. That being said I have ...
Oct 31, 2015 -
Re: Yesterdays Makeup
Hi Felistia here with a short review. I read both of your poems and personally I like this one better, so this is the one I am going to write ...
Oct 31, 2015 -
Re: Front Page Material
Hi Felistia here with a short review. This is clever writing and reminds me of something I read in a detective book a long time ago. I love the accent ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: Autobiography of a Stranger
Hi Felistia here with a short review. Wow this is beautiful. So emotional and the way it tells the story is amazing. You must be an amazing writer. This shows ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: To Write a Poem | Unedited
Hi Felistia here with a short review. I couldn't agree more. Poetry is a pain, but it is beautiful at the same time. I am not very good when it ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: How I know I am Alive
Hi Felistia here with a short review. Wow that was very well described. You used such beautiful words and the feelings are very colourful. I like how you described almost ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: Seasons
Hi Felistia here with a short review. Over all it is a very colourful poem and describes the seasons well. In the verse (Spring is full of blooming life like ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: Central Park
Hi Felistia here with a review that I am going to write as I read. First thought: What a beautiful opening paragraph, both descriptive and interesting. One problem, the last ...
Oct 29, 2015
