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Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.5 (Final) - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Before we start I wanted to ask if you'd ever had this chapter as a short story, ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.4 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Dragging Re’ana to a nearby wall, Fang tore aside the ornate tapestry that hung from the ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.3 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Just a quick nit pick [quote]The wraith-like entities dove down on the frightened guests and ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.2 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “The only thing good about Elves is m their music,” There's a slight grammar mistake in ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.1 - Look Who Crashed the Party
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “Quite,” Re'ana said. Putting aside her interactions with Fang, her stay had been perfect. Apparently she ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.5 (Final) - First Meetings
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Hurrying through the door that she had entered from she hurriedly woke the cook. This sentence ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.4 - First Meetings
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “That's strange,” Re'ana said. “Even animals have to eat.” When she looked out into the woods ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 1.3 - First Meetings
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks The morning light dawned in the library of books that reached to the ceiling. I'm not ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: cornflower blue
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Theme: This is a rather cliche theme for the most part, but I thought that ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Snowflakes and Ashes
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Observations The trees are skeletons now. Their hands reach up to the sky and try to touch ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Girl at the Coffee Shop
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Observations Every day she comes in at noon, orders a coffee, light on the sugar but heavy ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Teddy Ruxpin's Mis-adventures in Toyland Chapter III
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Just a quick note: I've no idea why this doesn't show up in the green room and ...
Sep 14, 2016 -
Re: A dark sky
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “My phone is in my pocket. I must get it. Now. How? Right. I have to ...
Sep 12, 2016 -
Re: Anorexia and a Heart of Porcelain
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks You’re stardust and cynical lullabies beneath the willow. I'm not sure about the word "cynical". It ...
Sep 10, 2016 -
Re: Ascension/Chapter One
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I step back so he can climb out of bed and then walk over Just a ...
Sep 8, 2016