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Re: Arachne
Hi Artemis28, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. Firstly I just love the poem and everything about it. The concept, the description, the emotion, all that. The ...
Nov 20, 2015 -
Re: Every Detail
Hi ChocolateCello, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. First off I just want to congratulate you on the amount of emotion you managed to work into here. ...
Nov 19, 2015 -
Re: The Real Villain
Hi FallWolf, Felistia here with a short review on you wonderful piece of work. First off I really like the concept you have here about how the author and the ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: Stardust and Broken Dreams
Hi Tigerlilly37, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. I really like the descriptions and use of words in here. I also love the rhyming scheme you used, ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: Walking Through the Forest
Hi jessiebear, Felistia here with a short review on your piece of writing. Firstly I like the descriptions in here, though it could use some more colourful words. Describe the ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: Talking With the Stars
Hi Edelweiss, Felistia here with a short review on your short story. Firstly I love the descriptions in here, they are so gracefully told that they sweep you off your ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: Death
Hi 1998, Felistia here with a short review on you poem. I really like the concept you have here about why people are afraid of death or not. I find ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: Glimpsing Infinity
Hi Verser, Felistia here with a short review on your poem\short story. First off, I really love all the colourful descriptions in here. How you describe the dawn and the ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: Breakable
Hi racket, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. Firstly, well done on writing something so creative. I have never seen anything like this. The last line sums ...
Nov 16, 2015 -
Re: The Cult of Wolves
Hi HolographicLadybug, Felistia here with a short review on you short story. First off, I really like that it is about wolves. The way you described the forest and the ...
Nov 15, 2015 -
Re: This is Reality
Hi HolographicLadybug, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. I will start with the goods and go to the nit-picks, so first off I love how you described ...
Nov 15, 2015 - Re: On and On Nov 14, 2015
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Re: Music is Powerful
Hi Artemis28, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. I completely agree with you, I am listening to music right now and I listen to it when ever ...
Nov 13, 2015 -
Re: Mutual Insanity
Hi AceOfPayds, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. First welcome to YWS, I hope you like it here. I really like this poem, it has a nice ...
Nov 13, 2015 -
Re: The Star Gardens
Hi FallWolf, Felistia here with a short review on you short story\poem. Firstly I really love the story and all the beautiful words you used to create this enchanted world. ...
Nov 12, 2015