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Re: The Remarkable Blossoming of Lola - Chapter 4
Hi EternalRain, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: I like the plot so far as it is fairly interesting, but I hope to ...
Feb 7, 2016 -
Re: She Loved Him, And He Loved Her, But It Wasn't That Simple
Hi Biluata, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I really like this theme of the two lovers each so different in personality and ...
Feb 6, 2016 -
Re: The Snow Queen (Part III)
Hi ErikaHale, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: Your story is getting more interesting and I am glad that you put a maybe ...
Feb 5, 2016 -
Re: Mother Doesn't Want Me To Swim
Hi Yams, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I am not quite sure what the theme is, but I'll make a guess. (I'm ...
Feb 4, 2016 -
Re: Earthquake Setting Description Excerpt
Hi Chakeber, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D I am just going to say ahead of time that everything in my review is honest, ...
Feb 4, 2016 -
Re: The Snow Queen (Part II)
Hi ErikaHale, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: Now we have a plot, well some of it anyway. I am really glad that ...
Feb 4, 2016 -
Re: your hands set me afire
Hi hwrites, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I really like the theme you had here. I also liked that you used a ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: Bottled Up Emotions
Hi MadWriter, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I can see that this is a little rushed compered to your last poems, but ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: The Tale of an Itinerant Storyteller
Hi NecobellaTor, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: You have presented a classic theme with a nice twist. This time the damsel isn't ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: Chased
Hi writer1204, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: The story you present here is really fast paced and very easy to get into. ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: Not How We Dreamed
Hi MadWriter, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I really enjoyed reading this poem because of the theme you presented. I have never ...
Feb 1, 2016 -
Re: The Fifth Sense
Hi monotonix, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: So you started out the story in very descriptive manner which I really liked, because ...
Feb 1, 2016 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 11: Somebody Who She Used To Know
Hi MadWriter, Felistia here with a review of you on the wonderful day. :D Story: You expanded on the Gabriel a lot and gave Eloise a bit of back story ...
Feb 1, 2016 -
Re: Old
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story: The story is quite short, but definitely heartfelt. You tell the story in such a way ...
Feb 1, 2016 -
Re: hands made of sandalwood
Hi Pompadour, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful review day. :D Theme: I don't know what you are going on about this not being a good ...
Jan 31, 2016