fantasydragon01

It is all right!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't mind at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Wow! Just wow. The pace is good. The rhyme is good. The beat is good. I liked the theme of the story very much. I encourage you to keep on ...

Already did! :D

Thank you very much.

Okay. Thank you for the feedback. Very truly yours, fantasydragon01 Ps please look at the part 1 and my poem titled "kingdom beyond the mountains". Please comment on them and ...

Thanks. I have two other works: the dark crystal part one and a poem titled "kingdom beyond the mountains". Please look at them and comment. I will be writing more ...

Thanks for the feedback. I just literally published a part 2 like ten seconds ago :D. I will take your advice to heart. Very truly yours, fantasydragon01

This is a very cool poem. I read it to myself, and it sounded awesome. It is not rough or anything like that. Maybe you should a stanza, in which ...

Why, thank you very much. I will try to post a part 2. Also, thank you so much the gift. I really, really appreciate it. But what is it used ...

Thank you very much for the comment. I will be writing a part 2, though I do not know when, since I do not have many points. As for the ...

It is a very nice story. Do not worry about receiving negative reviews. You are just starting out, and reviews, whether positive or negative, are not meant to hurt or ...

Thanks for the comment. I admit that it needs a lot of work, but I am just trying it out. Now that you have said those things, I will try ...

It is a very nice poem. Most poems that do not rhyme are strange and I do not really enjoy them. However, this is smooth and vivid. But I think ...