eviehoward

I read your most recent life/death poems yesterday and gave it a thumbs up all round because it was brilliant. Now I know that you aren't just a 1 hit ...

I like the odd rhyme scheme. It's quite thought provoking. Your lack of punctuation adds to the puzzle of your poem. I have no critique as I can't really critique ...

Just so you know, I get this feeling too. It's like you are nothing because you haven't achieved anything. But hang in there, we all find something that makes us ...

So hi there :) I'd like to say good on you for learning an instrument :D I never got round to learning but don't have the time now. Your poem ...

HI there! First off I love your imagery :) You're so vivid when you write, it almost felt that I was Aliya. I only have one criticism... your punctuation is ...

Hi there! Well first off I love this :) Your personification of time is something that is rarely done and I really love this piece purely for that fact. Time ...

This feels like one of those poems you read as a child to help you learn sounds :D No offence is meant by that, actually it's the opposite. I love ...

I have actually written a piece just like this but it's a conversation from Lucifer to God. But to your poem. I love the physical structure, how you separated each ...

I absolutely love this poem :D Your rhyming is perfect which is quite rare as usually there is something a 'little off'. You are right that there is a common ...

Hi there :D Well first off I'm addicted to fizzy drinks, only because I suffer from Chronic Fatigue and the sugar is the only thing that gives me any energy ...

I just love that last line! Your use of modern day references made it much more relate-able such as the Nick Cage on (I swear he churns out 20 useless ...

I really do like this poem as it is very true. Without music we would have nothing. I think the last line needs to cut the words 'creation of' as ...

I think this was perfect as it is. This is the first time I haven't had any criticisms about a piece of writing on this site! I think the length ...

Let me give it to you straight: this needs to be improved. I can see some promising aspects in the story, and believe that It could be very scary if ...

I really like this poem but I have a few suggestions. Maybe separate into different stanzas? It feels too 'in your face' if you know what I mean. It feels ...