I absolutely love this poem
Your rhyming is perfect which is quite rare as usually there is something a 'little off'. You are right that there is a common ground between dandelions and death. I really love your imagery, the loneliness of death and weeds, and how everything dies, including weeds which everyone can't seem to get rid of.
Overall I think that this is one of the best poems I have read on here so far, It's short, but paints a vivid picture of death.
Points: 261
Reviews: 32
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