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Re: your once and always former friend
To start off this review, I like the deep amount of personality you've managed to imbue in this short text. The sectioning feels like your version of the 5 stages ...
May 23 -
Re: Growing up feels glamorously grotesque
Hi bro I'm soo excited to review one of ur poems!! To start it off, a mild inconsistency is the third line where you've repeated the "had/have to do" from ...
May 23 -
Re: Goodbye Raven
This is absolutely heartwarming! What a gift you have given to your dear friend. I sincerely hope that the two of you enjoy each other's friendship for a long, long, ...
May 23 -
Re: hymne a l'amour
Okay so I just listened to the song and have been introduced to a shoddy translation of it. Already loved the poem from the start, but now I get it ...
May 21 -
Re: melancholy...
I want to start this review off by noting that you have genuinely grown as a writer. This work is capable of bringing out pronounced feelings across different tones. The ...
May 7 -
Re: A clown will always sweep a ballerina off her feet
Ohhh I really like this premise, very interesting characters that you've managed to intertwine well in terms of worldbuilding. Emra always seems to go for the damaged (and critically insane ...
Apr 24 -
Re: The Candlemaker
OOOooh this one's got a kick to it--- I always love a crisis of faith + family feels work, and I'm not ashamed to say I teared up a little. ...
Apr 11 -
Re: the day the music died
Heyy I'm here to review your work today!! To start things off, I'm in love with the prose. No matter how sad or melancholic the ending may be, the imagined ...
Apr 6 -
Re: things taste better deep fried
The structure and mash of ideas in this poem are both quite random, but I think you've done a good job on blending them and producing a unique result. I ...
Mar 22 -
Re: Holi and her
The rhyming here is such a JOY to read amazing job on that. I feel I could just rave about that the whole review. So this is amazingly personal and ...
Mar 14 -
Re: inhale
The whole presentation is quite nice, and at the end there's no text, only breathing, kind of like the narrator has innately realized the futility and is too tired to ...
Mar 14 -
Re: Houseflies
1.) How would you describe houseflies, as they are portrayed in this poem? Congrats. You've humanized houseflies. They feel nasty and non-judgemental , completely indiscriminate of their surroundings.
Mar 13 -
Re: the seabed and the sky
Just want to start this off by saying how much of a joy it always is to read your work, the lush imagery is something that my mind absolutely devours. ...
Mar 13 -
Re: 2025
Hey! I haven't reviewed any of your works before, but I'm super excited for this one. The editing and format was what caught my eye first, and even though it ...
Jan 1 -
Re: Monster creature of the closet
Heyy! So I've recently been checking out more of your works, and this one really stood out to me. For Markus and Mia's relationship, what I could ascertain from the ...
Dec 19, 2025
