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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Pabo's Planets

    Hello! This was something amazing, I am honored to review it. Way into the story, far away in a parallel universe, I noticed, finally, a little error. If you got ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Script » Dramatic, Film Re: .

    ElinorBrynn, wisegirl22 here for a review for Happy Fake Review day! I have seen you throughout the web, you seem like a pretty nice person for someone who writes so ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Literature Re: The Wife I Onced Loved

    Romania, nice to meet you again. Wisegirl22 wants to review/give praise so much that you're going to drown in it. So let's sing pink fluffy unicorns and start reviewing/praising! In ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Territorial - CHAPTER 1 = Goons

    EPICnumber1, thank you for the reviews. I appreciate it. In the title, you might want to try capitalizing chapter, and "territorial" is spelled incorrectly. Just minor errors easily fixed, so ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Lyrics » Realistic, General Re: It's Like You Said

    ArcticMonkey, good to see you again! I love the following! The very first thing I captured was the fact that every line is capitalized at the beginning. Go back and ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Dramatic, General Re: Dreams Shattering

    Moneypowerglory, how are you? This is wisegirl22, I would love to review this. The first thing that my sharp eyes caught was that this typo, "Has the one thing you ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Art » Dramatic, Other Re: Apprehension

    Hello, moment, wisegirl22 celebrating a very personal Fake Review Day! In the beginning of your thing, I see crescendo is misspelled. "It’s a melodic sound, but lacks cresendo." And not ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the minatour's wife

    Heya! Wise here for a fake review day review! First, I think "Minotaur" is spelled incorrectly, and you should capitalize the m. Next, you misspelled "your". "I slit you throat." ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Health, Spiritual Re: .,

    Gaurav009, I think I've seen your avatar somewhere. Well, wise here to review wisely! First of all, the title should be capitalized. All of it, except for "of". And nothing ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Health, Science Re: Bad Posture Could End Up Killing You in the End!

    KatyaElefant, hello again! This was really good, except for the fact that this "an" should be "any". "Overall, if you have an bad posture habits..." And that "cause" should be ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Walls

    Hassanfs, hello! I see you're a little new, do you need any help? If so, you can ask me whatever! :) I only have one error to point out. "Were" ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The Ending War (Percy Jackson Fan Fic.) Chapt. I

    Hey, mythologywriter, I followed you immediately. Tell your brother to join the Lerman club, if he's online. If he's not, tell him I wrote a Percy Jackson fanfic online. The ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Bike rides in Berlin

    TheWeather, good morning. My name is wisegirl22, I've seen you but haven't reviewed you, have I? Okay, I had a teensy-weensy problem with the Roman numerals. You don't have to ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Day That America Will Fall

    Chevy, wisegirl22 here again for some fake review day reviews! :) In the beginning, I noticed "began" doesn't fit quite right. You might want to change it to "begin". "Each ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Girl Dies in Boston

    Chevy, nice work on your poem here! I really have nothing to say here, the concept was full of perspicuity, no grammar or spacing errors, no typing errors either. I ...

    Aug 5, 2014


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