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Re: Pabo's Planets
Hello! This was something amazing, I am honored to review it. Way into the story, far away in a parallel universe, I noticed, finally, a little error. If you got ...
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Re: .
ElinorBrynn, wisegirl22 here for a review for Happy Fake Review day! I have seen you throughout the web, you seem like a pretty nice person for someone who writes so ...
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Re: The Wife I Onced Loved
Romania, nice to meet you again. Wisegirl22 wants to review/give praise so much that you're going to drown in it. So let's sing pink fluffy unicorns and start reviewing/praising! In ...
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Re: Territorial - CHAPTER 1 = Goons
EPICnumber1, thank you for the reviews. I appreciate it. In the title, you might want to try capitalizing chapter, and "territorial" is spelled incorrectly. Just minor errors easily fixed, so ...
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Re: It's Like You Said
ArcticMonkey, good to see you again! I love the following! The very first thing I captured was the fact that every line is capitalized at the beginning. Go back and ...
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Re: Dreams Shattering
Moneypowerglory, how are you? This is wisegirl22, I would love to review this. The first thing that my sharp eyes caught was that this typo, "Has the one thing you ...
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Re: Apprehension
Hello, moment, wisegirl22 celebrating a very personal Fake Review Day! In the beginning of your thing, I see crescendo is misspelled. "It’s a melodic sound, but lacks cresendo." And not ...
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Re: the minatour's wife
Heya! Wise here for a fake review day review! First, I think "Minotaur" is spelled incorrectly, and you should capitalize the m. Next, you misspelled "your". "I slit you throat." ...
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Re: .,
Gaurav009, I think I've seen your avatar somewhere. Well, wise here to review wisely! First of all, the title should be capitalized. All of it, except for "of". And nothing ...
Aug 5, 2014 -
Re: Bad Posture Could End Up Killing You in the End!
KatyaElefant, hello again! This was really good, except for the fact that this "an" should be "any". "Overall, if you have an bad posture habits..." And that "cause" should be ...
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Re: Walls
Hassanfs, hello! I see you're a little new, do you need any help? If so, you can ask me whatever! :) I only have one error to point out. "Were" ...
Aug 5, 2014 -
Re: The Ending War (Percy Jackson Fan Fic.) Chapt. I
Hey, mythologywriter, I followed you immediately. Tell your brother to join the Lerman club, if he's online. If he's not, tell him I wrote a Percy Jackson fanfic online. The ...
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Re: Bike rides in Berlin
TheWeather, good morning. My name is wisegirl22, I've seen you but haven't reviewed you, have I? Okay, I had a teensy-weensy problem with the Roman numerals. You don't have to ...
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Re: The Day That America Will Fall
Chevy, wisegirl22 here again for some fake review day reviews! :) In the beginning, I noticed "began" doesn't fit quite right. You might want to change it to "begin". "Each ...
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Re: A Girl Dies in Boston
Chevy, nice work on your poem here! I really have nothing to say here, the concept was full of perspicuity, no grammar or spacing errors, no typing errors either. I ...
Aug 5, 2014
