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Like Vivian said, I have read this before, I think. But reading it anew, I enjoy it so much I almost don't notice. You make this poem seem so beautiful, ...

EllaMatache, are you an absolute genius or something? Because as I read this piece, I could not believe how well written and amazing it was. This short story is written ...

RAVENMOONSTONE! HEYYYYYYYYYYYY!!! Hehe, sorry about weird entrance...anyways. The first paragraph of your chapter was good, it was extremely descriptive, and I could find nothing wrong with it except

Heya, Yastika02! I'm here from Team Black to review your poem! Okay, so this is a nice rhyming poem. It is extremely sweet, and I bet your mom loved this. ...

Hello, eriklysaker! Wisegirl22 here to review your short story on this fine Review Day! :D First sentence. It's a little rocky with the grammar. "Are" should be "is", and since ...

Heya, jjiillll! Wise here to review! So, in this sentence, "running" isn't the correct form of the word. I suggest you use "ran". "I ran my fingers through my blonde ...

Hey, CHRISSY321! First of all, you have some spacing errors, all throughout your piece. You need a space after the first quotation mark, and after all those periods. And, the ...

Amazing story, fortis! I couldn't write it better! I just have to say, it's a bit much like this one I read the other day. It was about this murderer ...

Hey, DrFeelGood! Wisegirl22 here to review, as I said! Okay, so let's ride a unicorn into this. The first line is a bit rocky. Since these readers are just introduced ...

Hello, LunaxArtemis! Okay, I didn't really know what to say for this. Just the normal capitalization talk...okay, so poems are basically sentences that sometimes rhyme and are put into separate ...

Hey! Okay, I really don't know what to say about this piece. The title was interesting, although it didn't really seem to match the story. I know this guy likes...whatever, ...

Sammy9, welcome! First off, the beginning paragraph was a bit rocky. I like your beginning, though. The ending of that quote can't just be a full sentence on. It has ...

Heya, KatGirl! Wise here to review! So first off, nice poem and start. I agree with emeraldfox that your title is spelled incorrectly, thus you should change the title and ...

Heya, DrFeelGood! Wisegirl22 here to review your work! The title should be capitalized correctly. "The Boy Who Hated "Lefties" is more like it. I've also noticed your italics are completely ...

Hello, maishaywca! Wisegirl22 here to review your short story! First off, this was an extremely meaningful and creative work. I absolutely loved it. But, there are some nitpicks I would ...