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Thanks for being the first to post in my WRFF! The poem was lovely and opinionated. It really shows your view on the world and I like it. A few ...

Hello! So, I like to get straight to the point. I like it. The idea is good and relatable and its well written. There are some things I noticed. 1. ...

Hello my friend! I dont like to mess around so im going to get right to it. :) Overall: Very captivating. It drew me in and the figurative language and ...

Haha! I like this! It's very funny and different. It's kind of like Dr.Suess, very different and odd but comforting to read. There are 2 minor things that need to ...

Hi, I'm emoticon220 but call me Rae. First things first, you shouldn't need to use all caps, I read the poem and it is very powerful in itself. I liked ...

This is a good poem. I liked the structure and the Way you chose to put it together , staring with "did you?" then beginning the sentences with did you, ...

Hey JackJohn, Its a really great story. I like the plot and the way the story moves. :) I noticed something as i was reading, when you say "But" always ...

I do not understand why people shun the people who are not like them. I never will. Personally, people are people, we are made how we are and no one ...

Really nice. I love your perspective and the metaphores you make. Few things to look at: they become a part of you. Then they just rip away and leave. Life ...

wonderful! the only thing i have to say is add some periods to make it flow better. i didnt know where one sentence bagan and the other ended. other than ...

good job! i appreciate your use of punctuation. i like how you expressed the feelings of different people everywhere. (i am also weird :) )the only thing i have to ...

GreaT! i loved the AABBAA format and the flow was even and...Flowy! Many would say it should be longer but Personally i prefer shorter poems. the only thing i have ...

Actually thats really good! i liked it a lot one little thing Less we stand and chant Lest not less. thats it...although i leave your poem to the grammer sharks ...

Beautiful Poem! it really shows the writers emotions and what they want but cant have all together very nice. on little thing though One step past te the thats it ...

I HATE YOU YOU LITTLE LIAR THIS IS RAE I COMMENTED ON A BUNCH OF UR STUFF NOT KNOWING IT WAS YOU UGGH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MEGAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :| EMAIL ME SOON OR ...