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Thank you very much for your review :) I read your other one on the first chapter, but ultimately decided just to reply to this one. About the comma thing, ...

Hello there, That was slightly confusing. Those last two stanzas were like "Wow wow wow, wait ... what?!" I clicked on this poem expecting to read a happy poem about ...

Hello there, This is really sad, yet very well written! Your word choice is optimal and the way you place "love" and "hardened heart" "burden of stone" was great. I ...

Thanks for the review and advice. :)

Thanks so much for the review. I admit that while I was writing this I was a bit nervous about how people would reply to this. Writing texts such as ...

Thanks for your review :). Most of the spelling errors are because of spell check. True as it is I did in fact spell them wrong to begin with . ...

Once again thanks for the review. I just read your last review so I haven't had the chance to make changes :). I tried adding more description in this chapter ...

Thank you for reading. About the telling too much information I had written a prologueththat's whole purpose was to get the curiosity of the reader. A commenter totally slammed like ...

Thanks for the advice and review. I'll change it as soon as I can. For the unfinished sentence I was going to see what Tacoma, Washington's school mascot was but ...

Ah, I see. Well then you can just ignore that part of my review. :)

lovelysayhi Okay, this was really well done. I like how the format changes so rapidly near the end. It makes it look like an actual letter and is a wise ...

lovelysayhi Okay, this was really well done. I like how the format changes so rapidly near the end. It makes it look like an actual letter and is a wise ...

Thanks, I appreciate you reading it :)

Oh geez, well at least it makes the poem feel realistic.

Thanks for the review. I was making Emmalyn up to be the daughter of the family friend, so yes she isn't related to him. As for the needed description, I ...