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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Little Sister

    Hi there, I would first just like to say that I found your poem to be cute, if not the cutest, piece of poetry I have ever seen on this ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Danger Mouse

    This song is rather confusing to me. Its good, but I am rather confused as to what you were trying to get across. The song itself is clearly about a ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cat

    This poem makes me smile. It is just so freaking adorable that I want to pick it up and hug it! I really like how you captured the essence of ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Bareface

    I am kind of in love with how simple this poem is. First of all I like the concept, of how when you peel back a mask that we construct ...

    Aug 29, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: marinescence

    Alright.. This poem is rather, tedious so to say. Its good as a first draft, but it seems rather incomplete and unrefined. The poems overall image of a castle by ...

    Aug 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: No One Is Alone

    I really like this poem, and at the place I am in right now this just highlights what I am feeling perfectly. This poem is just beautiful and sweet and ...

    Aug 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: A Question, An Answer

    I really like this poem. I really admire the emotional connection you have created here, it just speaks to me on a level where I am even unsure of what ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: Lost At Sea

    I really enjoyed this poem. But I just have a few little issues with this... I really admire you for trying out rhyming schemes as its a very good thing ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Sleepy Princess

    This poem is really, really morbid. I love it!!! Alright, as a fan of any story, poem, movie, painting, anything dark and sinister I must say that this made me ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hidden Sapphires

    First can I just say that this poem is amazing. I really like repetition, I know I say this a lot on reviews but to me, its just a really ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Beautiful Addiction

    Hello there, I really like this piece, its short, simple and yet its so connective with the subject. Something that could have been easily lost or forgotten in a short ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: the wolf and the white tree water

    Hello there, first of all I would just like to say that I really love this poem. I really like the fact that you avoid capitalizing "I" and various other ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Short Poem #1: Untitled

    Hi there, first of all I really like this piece. At the start of the poem, you are really creating a vivid image, to me, of sickness. The feverish haze ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: She sleeps soundly under starry skies

    Hi, First I would just like to say that I admire your choice of formatting. Most people just like putting a poem in paragraphs, aligned to the right of the ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: What lies beneath the smiles

    This poem... Oh my god, you are so talented. Writing poetry is difficult for people and yet you conveyed this message, the emotional connection perfectly. By your use of sentence ...

    Jul 2, 2015


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