eleutheromania

Okay so I thought that this poem was very confusing. Honestly thought I think maybe I'm just a bit ignorant of the situations you've written about. It jumped around quite ...

I loved your take of music in this characterization of rhythm. I really liked how you captured the haunting comfort of music, showing how it's wickedness is an escape as ...

I think this poem has a really good writing poem and is well put together in its writing characteristics. It has a rhythm that's easy to follow and flows really ...

This is wonderful. You have so much imagery and emotion poured over your words its hard not to drown in them (that's a good thing). I loved this poem. Not ...

Wow. This is really spectacular. The dark sadness and bitter manner in which the facts are explained is great. I want to print this and keep it where I can ...

I love this. I think it's haunting sorrows are gorgeous. The only trouble I had reading it was how the poem fell into rhymes sometimes, but not in any steadiness. ...

Wow, this was awesome. I loved everything about this poem. It was deep, hopeful, sad, descriptive, and it brought me into the things you're going through and made it easy ...

I thought this poem had a lot of sensations embedded in the words. I thought that was great. However, the rhythm you had in each stanza was different and it ...

I think this is incredible. I've felt what you described in your poem and what you wrote brought tears. Writing about hiding is something that's always been difficult for me ...

I like the way you didn't follow the rules of punctuation and sentence structure. You forced me to read your words the way I assume you would read them were ...

I like the vagueness of this poem, how it makes you think about what you're writing for. I think the comparisons you've made give the reader a better understanding of ...

I love the symbolism and jaggedness of your words. I thought the contrast of the first and second half was wonderful. However, I (personally) didn't like the way you divided ...

I thought this poem had a lot of strength in specificity. It showed me a scene of your emotions and the situation that they had sprung from with a clarity ...