electricbluemonkey

Like I said before, I just loved it. The style was really original, well, not seen very often is a good way to put it, its nice to see a ...

Yep, I think it was pretty good now that I look back, although you might want to change the format a bit, it doesn't flow well. Don't get disencouraged and ...

Yeah, I like it. Seemed more like a song, it was really good. And really, has Eloere/Firebird seen this?!

This was a pretty good poem, you created a great atmosphere for the reader. But overall I agree with Incandescence. The last line was really good, and tied in everything ...

Well, I actually liked that poem. Come on, Incandescence, its not THAT bad. I liked it, the flow was pretty bad, but the rhyming was great. I think you should ...

Wow, I love it. The flow is really good and the rhyming is exquisite. You can really write poems well, KayJuran

Yeah, overall I like it, but the second line, don't repeat hall. Maybe write, "Of a 100 mirrors" taking out hall just makes it flow better and just roll right ...

I know I posted a lot here reviewing this but once again, it is really good. About that sentence starters advice that Norris Redford said, yeah, I think you should ...

Yeah, that was very good. I loved the opening, although all of the things that were pointed out I do agree with. It was great, I can't wait for chapter ...

Well, I think it was pretty good, actually. Not that great, but it was ok. It seemed more like lyrics to a rock song than a poem, which is cool. ...

I love it. Very good and potent, just makes the reader want to read it 100 times. It actually grabbed me and made me want to read more. :thumb:

WOW! Don't change a thing, I so love it. If only I had three thumbs I'd give you three thumbs up. One of my favorite poems ever, it rocks. Hey, ...

basically you feel that nobody is around to help you or something, that you are all alone? You stated that in the poem, when you said in one part, "No ...

That was good. The rhyming was...wow, amazing. I love it!

Good, I liked it. But mostly I agree with Tessitore on those lines. I liked it, I think you could make it longer and should post more of it.