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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: One and One Make Two.

    Hello there. I'm Ehte here for the review. Out of the corner of my eye, I see you. In the depths of my heart, From the depths of my heart, ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Spring

    Hello there. I am Ehte here for the review. I like this poem very much. You have done a great work with imagery. The description of spring was in a ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Angel's Cry

    Hello there. I'm Ehte here for the review. Have you ever hear an angel cry, Have you ever heard an angel cry, while it sang it's mournful tune? It shatters ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Path

    Hello there. I am Ehte here for the review. This was a good poem but it had some ups and downs as all poems have(except some). First of all, did ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: untitled

    Hello there. This is a very nice piece of poetry though it does not have any particular rhyme scheme but the flow is really very good. It invokes raw emotions ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ode To Zombies [contest entry]

    Sorry,but if it was creepiness you wanted then you failed with me. However I find this poem more humorous than anything. We wanted it to be humorous so i think ...

    Mar 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: When I Should Be Paying Attention

    Hello there. I'm here for the review. I liked this piece a lot. Because i do the same thing while in class. XD It was fun to read throughout. It ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Running With Music

    Hello there. I'm Ehte here for the review. I really liked this piece as i myself am a music lover. A very original and unique idea. I really enjoyed reading ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Prophesy of promise

    Hello there. I am Ehte here for a review. It would rather be a short one because i am feeling a bit sleepy. xD Okay so you have got a ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Do you believe in life?

    Hello there. I'm Ehte here for the review. I really liked your poem. It has a perfect flow and i enjoyed reading it right from the start up to the ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Craving for Books

    Hello there. I am Ehte, here for the review. Firstly to say, i did not quite like this poem of yours. It lacks rhythm. It has no flow and many ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The colours of our lives

    Hello there. I am Ehte, here for your review today. A great sense of imagery you have there my friend but your poem lacks the main thing which is flow. ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Winter's Connection

    Hello there. I am Ehte here for your review. The clouds whisper they're earthly words to me. The clouds whisper their earthly words to me. Heartfelt and close they know ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Fear

    Hello twin. Ehte here for the review. I often wonder how, Or why, People can just stand there, people just stand there, As they watch another cry, as they watch ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forbidden Love

    Hello December. I am here for the review. Staring back at his pictures not being able to stop the pain You break this into two lines from pictures onwards. That ...

    Mar 15, 2011


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling