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Re: The Realization
I'm sorry I ever hurt you, I really meant no harm, Period Just listen to what I have to say, No comma. And do not be alarmed. This line is ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Memory of Sorrow
I tremble, When that memory, Comes knocking, At the windows of my soul. This line has a good imagery. I love it. That memory, Of my ancestors; With pain, Stuck ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Light
the sun, the moon and the stars Stars appear on velvet sky Stars appear on the velvety sky as those cheerful sun beams fade. as cheerful beam of the sun ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Be Quick.
Hello there. It's good on your part to accept that there's something wrong in the poem. It lessens the load off the reviewers back. XD Quick, go! Everybody, just leave ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Morbid Circus
Hello there. The picture is really very terrifying. I had watched a movie which was a bit relayed to the thing you have written over here. The title of the ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: What have I done to deserve this
Hello there. Here for the review. Pardon me if I might be repeating some of the reviewers over here but I had to review this work of yours because I ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: A Poet's Land
Hello there. I just found out that this piece of yours was in my reading list. So, here I am to give it a review. I cannot assure that it ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Raison de L'insomnie
Hello there pup. It was a good poem. I liked it. It had a deep meaning to it. You had no specific rhyme scheme to your piece but then also ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Lovely
Hello there. I shall be your reviewer for today even if you do not want me to be. XD All things were quiet, living in such a swirling whisper. I ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Something More
Hello there. I shall be your reviewer for today even if you do not want me to be. XD My life itself has become a chore, Remove itself. The goes ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Seasons
Hello there. I shall be your reviewer for today even if you do not want me to be. XD Spring flowers blossom beautiful Their pink and purple heads pushing up ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: The Tumbleweed
Hello there, Lav. I'll be your reviewer for today even if do not want me to. XD This is a great poem. With beautiful imagery and a detailed description of ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Post-storm
Hello there. I'm Ehte and I shall be your reviewer for now. (: You have a good poem here. Great imagery. Simple yet powerful. Totally builds up the environment of ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Nostalgia
Hello there, Carotene. I am here for the review, as you had begged asked me for one. ;) I loved reading this. The concept you have is very unique and ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: lanky fingers and rosy cheeks.
Hello there. You have a very confusing poem over here. You have totally messed a lot of things together over here. It lacks structure. It lacks rhythm. It lacks flow. ...
Apr 9, 2011
