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Really good piece... Short, neat and everything is in a perfect flow... Its a good thing that everything sticks with the heading and nothing is off the track... Keep up ...

Woohh buddy you should keep this under the short story category... By the way good use of words and very soulful... Keep up the good work... :) PM me for ...

Great piece of work... Good flow of rhythm in the poem... But do use punctuation marks in your work to make it more interesting and appealing... Keep up the good ...

Great work mate.... I could just feel all the things which you felt at that edge... Good work with the emotions.... Keep up the good work.... :) And for anything ...

A good piece of work... Short and precise... This thing has a great title... After reading the title the reader would want to see the content... Good work with the ...

its a good one but the ending was not convincing.... The end could have been more interesting.... Ode is a type of lyrical verse. It is an elaborately structured poem ...

DAMN.... :D It is the word of the day for me... :) Great piece.... Very impressive... Keep up the good work... :)

great piece.... good work with the expressions and emotions... the poem is really on the dark... yo showed the evil side of nature.... keep up the awesome work you are ...

Really a great piece... I must say an EPIC.. Loved it... I want an autograph.... I'm your fan from now on... Keep up the awesome work... Looking forward for your ...

Long years have past And I never knew that someone, Someone could be like you. Mocked favorite line Rejected favorite line Ignored favorite line That is all I got.. But ...

Awesome.... Just if you had kept the flow correct it would have been flawless... Except just for it everything is really impressive.... Great work... Keep it up... :)

A good piece but you did not get the flow of the poem right.... It could have been better than this.... I myself write poems and i can understand how ...

So what, I may be younger, So what, I may be new, You're meant to be accepting, Helpful, not annoyed. My heart stops- a new message, My heart stops- a ...

I like your name "Silent Rain"... A very thoughtful name.... And about your poem - its good.... i like the breaking of your lines to make them sound good.... great ...

Good work... I too have read found poetry the first time but i guess its good.... and its good that you mentioned that its not an original work.... Keep up ...