Night walker
mortal stalker
blood drinker
quick thinker
hungry killer
mind willer
wood hater
no data
life stealer
blood dealer
fast mover
never the loser
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Very fast paced and entertaining. Very enjoyable!!
Really good piece...
Short, neat and everything is in a perfect flow...
Its a good thing that everything sticks with the heading and nothing is off the track...
Keep up the good work...
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Neat poem. Fun to read, the pace is fast enough that a person don't stop to think about what he or she's reading, just get flashes of whatever cool image comes to mind. The 'mind willer' line threw me off a bit, however. I'm not sure 'willer' is a word, and it just sounds a tad too silly. Dunno what you could change it to... 'thriller,' maybe?
Fun read, keep writing!