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Re: Dismay
Hello there. :3 Nitpicks: My heart sinks in absolute dismay, my pride falling from my heart. The happiness I once felt, washed out of me and seeping away. This is ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: The Unspeakable
Hello there. :3 The wind blows always , So is there any particular reason on keeping this place blank or it was just a mistake? though it might not seem ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Carevale di ipocriti
Hello there. :3 You have a really different poem. The name carnival of hypocrites is very interesting. Kind of catchy! But my friend this poem had some loose ends. The ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Rainy Day
Hello there. :3 Nitpicks: It is raining Steady and consistent I am alone Safe and consistent Rain! I love it when it rains. And the smell of earth and the ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Influences
Hello there. :3 This is a good poem. The title is the thing that made me read it and then review it. The rhyme scheme and the stanza format is ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: how do you know?
Hello there. :3 Well, you have a lot of questions, there. Your poem started off with a good rhyme and flow and I expected it be one of those good ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: We are the same/ something changed
Hello there. :3 i really liked this poem. it had a good flow and rhyme, it went off a few places but a little of can be ignored if he ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: the lone witness
Hello there. :3 Are you from India? Well, I am from India and by your name I can say that you could be from India. By the way, welcome to ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: The Essence of Nothing: A Series of Short Poems
Hello there. :3 Nitpicks: In the end of everything the only thing that is left is the embodiment of that which is not. There is a lot of mystery related ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: First Love
Hello there. :3 Are you from India? I asked that because your name tells me that you are from India. Well, I am from India. Nitpicks I don't know how ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Pain
Puffy Wuffy. :3
May 29, 2011 -
Re: A Hurting Heart
Hello there. :3 It is a good poem you have here. But it just needs some editing and it will be “awesome”. You need to add more imagery to your ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Too late
Hello there, Fellow Bamboozler. :3 The poem was good but there were problems which need to be solved. like the unrelated stanzas. And especially the punctuations. They are very important ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Winterland
Hello there. :3 This poem was on my reading list for a long time because I have been kinda lazy these days and my exams are here and... never mind. ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: A thimble, a rose, and a ring.
Hello there. I shall be your reviewer for the poem. The title made me want to read this. You have a great title for the poem here. And the imagery ...
May 15, 2011
