dragonrider

Great poem. It was very interesting. I wasn't really expecting to read about a person's love for a brother. I'm guessing that based off of how protective the narrator feels ...

Great poem. I liked how it had a clear direction and focus. It has a crystal clear message and I can completely relate to the questions the narrator asks themself. ...

This was definitely a very simple and straight to the point kind of poem. It's very different and it's refreshing to read. It's just a loving relationship between a person ...

This was a unique poem that's for sure. I think that this is a good description of how people detest math. In my opinion, it could have been better if ...

I adored this poem. I loved your command of diction and the language itself. It all flowed smoothly together perfectly. I think one of my favorite lines would be: "When ...

Good job on this piece but I feel like it could use some work. I understand it's about love and a breakup but I did not feel any real purpose ...

That took an unexpected turn. When I read the title and 3/4 of this story, I was expecting some sort of optimistic, moving ending. It was unexpected but I did ...

Wow that was a really powerful poem. I am very glad that you decided to write this piece. It is very insightful and, I am sad to say, very true. ...

This is indeed a very insightful, beautiful poem. It was a great way to express such loving feelings toward your mother. She does sound like an amazing person. I'm sure ...

This was definitely very interesting and unusual. But I liked it. It was very descriptive. I definitely had some vivid pictures in my head. I thought that was executed well. ...

Right off the bat, I thought this was awesome. It was very descriptive and worded very well. You're obviously very skilled. The beginning caught my attention right away. The ending ...

Oh my god, this was awesome. I was laughing my face off almost the entire chapter. I don't have a lot to criticize. I think there were some grammar errors ...

Yes, my questions were answered! I can't believe you wrote this when you were drunk. It's awesome. Don't laugh, or well go ahead, but I'm finding your novel to be ...

Right off the bat, I loved your descriptions! "he smiles at me to show a set of teeth like piano keys" This was a very good chapter, and my curiousity ...

I have to say, I enjoyed this chapter. It wasn't my favorite chapter, but it was an important one. I liked how much you revealed about the characters in this ...