dragonight9

What an interesting dream. I've had a few vivid dreams that never made sense and honestly your dream seamed to make more sense than any of them. At least there ...

Wow! What the heck just happened?! You definitely grabbed my attention and made me want to read more with this chapter. The revelation that Wyverns exist in this world and ...

Hi again, this one is a bit shorter I guess, still good though. I loved that you mentioned that "it was a very nice cliff" I chuckled a bit when ...

Cool short stories. I was just scrolling through and checking anything that caught my interest but this one actually held my interest. I was bullied myself (though not that bad) ...

Hi again, here's my next review. Overall this did a good job of explaining a lot of the confusion in the last chapter, and the part about the rock at ...

Hi again, still not completely sure how to do this but here are a few things I noticed while reading. The first big thing was a grammar error in the ...

This was wonderful poetry and though I am not much for poetry myself it still added a nice flare of mystery and intrigue to the story. It also allowed for ...

Not bad but there are a few places to improve. I thought the chapter was a bit short but as long as you are consistent that isn't a bad thing. ...

That title lead me to expect something very different from this story. It really sounded like a fever dream at times and her last thoughts sounded like the beginning of ...

This was very good at drawing out emotions and empathy for the wolf and his lost family. It also left a lot of things ambiguous such as whether the young ...

Good cliff hanger bit is was a bit abrupt as well. The only other improvements I could think of are perhaps and explanation of the quote from 'Mother' (unless it ...