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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: flying out of a cannon is the best feeling

    Hey, Dogs here to review! I think your piece was amazing. It was filled with emotion and I like that. Wait, I more than like that... I love that!!! So ...

    Jun 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A new morning after another night...

    Hey, Dogs here to review! So let's get right into the review. I'm going to start off by pointing out nitpicks and suggestions. *Please don't take these personally, I'm only ...

    Jun 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Disabilities, no need to compare

    Hey, Dogs here to review! This review is a little long because I have tons to say about this poem! So let's get started. I have tons to say about ...

    Jun 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: There Are Cuts On My Arm

    Hey, Dogs here to review! I really like your poem. It's interesting, because I'm always getting cuts, and I have no clue where they came from. I will start with ...

    Jun 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: I Am Death

    Hey Dogs here for a review! First off I really liked your poem. It had a great rhyme scheme and lots more! Let's get started! This poem speaks tons of ...

    Jun 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Powerful love

    Hey, Dogs here for a review! Also... WELCOME TO YWS (young writers society) I will tell you more about our fun and amazing community at the end of my review. ...

    Jun 15, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: But Never Forget

    Hey, Dogs here to do a quick review! First off, I really liked this poem. It's really good. I just a couple of suggestions and mistakes I'm just going to ...

    Jun 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: Good Things Go On

    This was a very beautiful poem. I really liked the movement of the poem. Hey...! Dogs here to review! Again, loved the poem. I like the movement and what I ...

    Jun 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Chocolate

    Hey, Dogs here for a review! First off, I loved this poem. The theme was amazing. I like how you compared her love and her to the chocolate. The title ...

    Jun 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: The Apple Tree

    This poem was very good, and very truthful about the greed humans (like me and you and everyone else) feel. People feel like all they need and care about is ...

    Jun 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Chocolate

    You... You.... You just like said my life, like a huge aspect of it. Chocolate. Like OMG, I'm so glad you wrote this, and I'm like obsessed with chocolate. This ...

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: untitled;unknown

    This poem was... I'm speechless. Wow it's great, here's what I got from it. A lonely girl, who had a terrible past. Hints "lonely as the past" So the girl ...

    Mar 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Hold On

    I really loved this poem. The message was so great and wonderful. I didn't really see many nitpicks, but you know, just little errors, that everyone has. I really liked ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Gold (For School)

    Hey, Dogs here to review, and you can count on me to help you out my friend! So, let's get started. First off, I really love your poem, I could ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Dream Big

    Hey, Dogs here for a review. Let me start off by saying I love your poem. It's so cute! *I'm going to start off with nitpicks/errors/mistakes and suggestions whatever you ...

    Feb 29, 2016


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