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Re: a title?
Hey, Dogs here to review! While I was reading this, a smile sprawled across my face. I couldn't help myself. This poem was so amazing, and so unique. Nothing like ...
Feb 1, 2017 -
Re: For my one and only.
Hey, Dogs here for a review! But, before we do get into the review, this is something to know! Hey, welcome to YWS! My name is Dogsrule5, but call me ...
Feb 1, 2017 -
Re: Tails Down
Hey, Dogs here to review! First things first, I really liked this poem. It was beautiful, with few errors. Overall, you had a beautiful meaning behind your poem. To me, ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: it felt good
This was an amazing piece! I really enjoyed reading it! Honestly I have nothing bad to say about it! If I did though, I wouldn't know what to say...! This ...
Jan 24, 2017 -
Re: Loss of Pulse
Hey Dogs here to review! First off for many people this is a very touching subject, and I'm very glad you wrote about it. It makes me glad to see ...
Jan 16, 2017 -
Re: Chapter two, Liliths journy
Hey Dogs here to review! This is a very good chapter. I'm going to give you a suggestion or two below, then I'm going to go into what was good, ...
Jan 13, 2017 -
Re: The book of 1,000 lives, Chapter 1 Violet's school day
Hey Dogs here for a review! I really loved this chapter and can't wait to read more! First I'm going to start off by pointing out your nitpicks/mistakes, and well ...
Jan 13, 2017 -
Re: Last.
Hey Dogs here for a review! I'm really glad I read this poem. It was very good, as well as filled with emotion, which is something I personally love about ...
Jan 12, 2017 -
Re: What poetry is
Hey, Dogs here to review! Let's start off with a positive note, I really loved your poem! Now let's get into a more helpful review! So I don't mean to ...
Nov 28, 2016 -
Re: the little girl who caught the stars
Hey! Dogs here to review! I really liked this poem. It was so imanginative and I think the meaning was very good (if there was supposed to be a meaning ...
Nov 12, 2016 -
Re: falling at wonderful heights
Hey Dogs here to review! So let's start off with the summery of what I liked. Next I'll talk about nitpicks/mistakes and then I'll go more in depth of the ...
Nov 1, 2016 -
Re: Mermaids of Blue Ocean
Hey, Dogs here to review! So first off I really loved this poem. It was so... Imaginative and fantasized. I love fantasy and mermaids. It's great to see that someone ...
Oct 9, 2016 -
Re: Love is Confusing
Hey Dogs here to review! First off... Wow... I'm just speechless. I really loved this poem, it was so meaningful. Let's just not talk here, we are just going to ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: In These Halls
I started high school, this past Thursday, and I wasn't really paying attention to all of this. I was more paying attention to my thoughts. Will I get lost on ...
Aug 20, 2016 -
Re: Me is Not I
Hey Dogs here to review! Frist off I loved your poem. It showed so much about society. Your poem is bold and to me a little brave. I most likely ...
Aug 17, 2016
