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Re: The soul is eternal
hey dogs here, I really really really really like this poem and i think that it is overall great. it flows nicely. All of the grammar errors have already been ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Ami .
hey hey hey. dogs here I LOVE YOUR POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! it sounds great and i know exactly what you mean. I LOVE the description and how it flows all together. my ...
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Re: Lost Cause
hey this is dogs here krupp. I really really like your poem and i get that feeling all the time. i think your poem flows well and it sounds great. ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: A Bridge of Colors
hey BLUE DRAGON this is dogs here, I really like this poem it flows well and sounds really great. i like the first stanza the best :D but i don't ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Honestly Ugly
hey pen, dogs here I really really like your poem it flows really well and it has a lot of meaning in it. i can't find anything that has already ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Malachi
hey this is dogs, I really think poem, i really like how it flows and it sounds absolutly great. i don't have very much to add to this, but i ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: Compassion out of Pain
hey this is dogs, I really like your poem!!! i thought that it was great and it flows well, i understood it perfectly and i just liked it all around ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: Click.
hey scribbling dogs here. I really like your poem, but you need to make your theme stronger. you need a strong metaphor. also you need to make this longer. the ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: I keep humming each day
hey dogs here I really liked this poem, even though i am not a big fan of love stories, i think this was still very good, the only line that ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Baptism of an Affair
hey babanuuk, dogs here. first of all i really like your piece and your idea, but it dosn't really flow that well for example in the first line, why say ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: I wish you'd die, Love
hey, this is dogs i really like your poem and i think that it has a great topic, however you rush into the hating scene too fast. you need to ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Debris
hey dogs here I think that this is a great poem. i really like how it flows and i agree with everyone above me. however the last line kinda made ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Back to Back
hey ashley dogs here I think that this is a great poem and it belongs exactly were you put it. I really enjoyed reading this. it flowed great and it ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Take the Sun
hey hey hey, dogs here i think that this is a beautiful poem. i truly enjoy reading all of your poems. this flows great and it sounds really good. unfortunately ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: Choice
hey flyer this is dogs I just wanted to say that this poem was GREAT AND I REALLY REALLY LOVE IT. i can't really find anything bad to say. ignore ...
Jun 30, 2009
