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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The soul is eternal

    hey dogs here, I really really really really like this poem and i think that it is overall great. it flows nicely. All of the grammar errors have already been ...

    Jul 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ami .

    hey hey hey. dogs here I LOVE YOUR POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! it sounds great and i know exactly what you mean. I LOVE the description and how it flows all together. my ...

    Jul 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Lost Cause

    hey this is dogs here krupp. I really really like your poem and i get that feeling all the time. i think your poem flows well and it sounds great. ...

    Jul 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Bridge of Colors

    hey BLUE DRAGON this is dogs here, I really like this poem it flows well and sounds really great. i like the first stanza the best :D but i don't ...

    Jul 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Honestly Ugly

    hey pen, dogs here I really really like your poem it flows really well and it has a lot of meaning in it. i can't find anything that has already ...

    Jul 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Malachi

    hey this is dogs, I really think poem, i really like how it flows and it sounds absolutly great. i don't have very much to add to this, but i ...

    Jul 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Compassion out of Pain

    hey this is dogs, I really like your poem!!! i thought that it was great and it flows well, i understood it perfectly and i just liked it all around ...

    Jul 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Click.

    hey scribbling dogs here. I really like your poem, but you need to make your theme stronger. you need a strong metaphor. also you need to make this longer. the ...

    Jul 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I keep humming each day

    hey dogs here I really liked this poem, even though i am not a big fan of love stories, i think this was still very good, the only line that ...

    Jul 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Baptism of an Affair

    hey babanuuk, dogs here. first of all i really like your piece and your idea, but it dosn't really flow that well for example in the first line, why say ...

    Jul 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I wish you'd die, Love

    hey, this is dogs i really like your poem and i think that it has a great topic, however you rush into the hating scene too fast. you need to ...

    Jul 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Debris

    hey dogs here I think that this is a great poem. i really like how it flows and i agree with everyone above me. however the last line kinda made ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Back to Back

    hey ashley dogs here I think that this is a great poem and it belongs exactly were you put it. I really enjoyed reading this. it flowed great and it ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Take the Sun

    hey hey hey, dogs here i think that this is a beautiful poem. i truly enjoy reading all of your poems. this flows great and it sounds really good. unfortunately ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Choice

    hey flyer this is dogs I just wanted to say that this poem was GREAT AND I REALLY REALLY LOVE IT. i can't really find anything bad to say. ignore ...

    Jun 30, 2009


i enjoy repeating things twice in poetry. but only ever twice. nothing tragic ever happens thrice if i have control of it
— theromanticchemist