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Hello there Audy! Tucker here with your review! Okey dokey, to start I just simple adored this piece. It was brilliantly written and you had such excellent imagery. On top ...

Hello their Andrew! Dogs here with your review :). OKey dokey, I really loved this piece, especially because I'm such an obsessive Greek mythology fanatic. This is just a tiny ...

Hello there Karzkin! Dogs here with your review today. On a side note, you're my 350th review! yaayyyy! So I shall be sure to make this a good one :). ...

"Neon destination sign glowing in the murky grey of the morning." Ooooo love love love the imagery you use here. Great word choice, you also have an excellent start. Throwing ...

"to make me think of the way I'd be after ages" Ok this line is a little awkwardly worded. Try saying: "to make me think of the way I'd be ...

"her buttocks shone with oil" such a great line, good imagery and an excellent way to start this piece off. I'm gonna go on nit pick mode and say that ...

Hello Mikko! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, I love the idea of this piece. It reminds me of The Road, a book I've been reading recently. I ...

Hello there Ariana! Dogs here with your review today. To start WELCOME TO YWS! I see you're a relatively new member, and if you ever need anything you send me ...

Hello there Costya! Dogs here with your review today! Okey dokey, firstly WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, if you ever need anything or just a ...

Hello there Samantha! Dogs here with your review. Ok to start off, WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here, if you ever need any help, or suggestions, ...

Hello there Kay! Dogs here with your review. Okkkeey dokey! I love this topic, I thought it was funny and cute. Funny because of the over done and almost melodramatic ...

Hello there Persy! Dogs here with your review (terribly sorry for any missed spelling errors I have, my spell check isn't working for some reason). Okey dokey, to start you ...

"not anything is good" A little awkwardly worded. I'd suggest saying "nothing is good" instead. "as dark as an onyx gem" Nice imagery, good vocab also. Way to use a ...

Hello there Val! Tucker here with your review. Okey dokey, I like the little note you give us about your colors. I know I certainly would never have been able ...

Hello there Pencil! Dogs here with your review. Okeyy dokey, I love the topic of this piece, certainly lots of room for personification and creating a shape for "beauty" as ...