I'm going to be taking this from the perspective of someone who has a vague idea of mythology, but hasn't studied it obsessively. And for me, that makes this poem feel very watered down. There are so many references, but when I replace them with other parts of speech, they still don't have much effect.
Like:
"Where thousands of people of the same culture died in vain?
Where people of the same culture wept and cried with pain,
for never to see assumedly their home country again?
...
Whence lofty dudeman looks out on the main?"
So you can see how I'm reading it. That means that, condensed down, this poem says:
"Was it here that tragedy happened? Over and over as the same moon passes by?"
For me, this is the potential of a poignant poem, but it's lost too much in name-dropping to get anywhere. Maybe I'm missing whatever scenic or tonal references that the names might have added, but yeah, coming at this from a different angle. "Was it here?" is what you've asked, and what's the next thing to ask? If it is, what does that make the speaker feel? If it's not that place, what does that make the speaker feel? Why doesn't the speaker know? Is this a modern speaker looking out over fields in Italy or Greece? Give me the reason I'm reading this poem. What does it change in me? What do I learn or learn to feel or simply feel because I read it? I want something more intense than what is already here.
On the technical side, be careful of your meter, please!
There are some places where it seems very patched together and dragging. For example:
Where the gods made mad men, who were once sane,
All for a woman called Helen to gain?
"the" takes away from a straight forward movement, and the emphasis is off in the line about Helen. Is this on purpose? To evoke a sense of discord? It would work better if you made sure each previous line was tight, then. Adding frills to every line to add to the meaning will lose the idea of form completely and then have no effect the way it does when everything else is solid, but one sticks out and is clearly an intentional change.
PM me if you have any questions, please.
Good luck and keep writing!
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