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  • Other » Other, General Re: Fading Away

    Hello there Ephermeral! Dogs here with your review. Ok, I loved the idea of this piece and you put so much excellent imagery into your writing here that it made ...

    Feb 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: she who is more fickle than lady love (edited)

    Hello there Day! Dogs here with your review. Before I even start into my review, I really gotta say that the word choice and imagery that you use is just ...

    Feb 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Sacred

    Hello there Choma! Dogs here with your review today! Ok to start I like this poem, it has a nice message, although at times it's a little too ambiguous. On ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Hanging in the Hyacinth Gardens

    Howdy Franks, Tucker here with your review. Just as a side note ladies and gentlemen... this poem was written in less than three hours. Which is beyond impressive to just ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Audible at Night

    Hello there Indi! Tucker here with your review. Okey dokey, to start off congrats for finishing this wondrous piece for my poetry contest. An interesting piece, you really step around ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncertainty

    Hello there Val! Tucker here with your review. You have some of the most difficult words which means potential for some of the coolest words :). Please do note that ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Melancholy curtains hanging from rusted ropes (Too much misery to hold)

    Howdy Spark! Tucker here with your review today :). Ohhh you have some of my favorite words in this poem. Let's dive in shall we? "waiting to get their bite" ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Rain Drops (Thoughts are...)

    Hello there Lylas! Tucker here with your review. Okey dokey, wonderful wonderful piece of writing. I love the metaphor you have rocking here. Great idea to write a poem about, ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, Dramatic Re: candy man

    Hello their Reason! Tucker here with your review :). Okey dokey, what an excellent prompt you got, certainly lots of creative potential in there, and you take it to its ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To Speak

    Hello their Inverted! Tucker here with your review today :). Okey dokey, interesting piece you have here. On a quick side note, I would highly suggest that you don't capitalize ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature Re: Finally Time (Flash Fiction)

    Hello their Franks! Tucker here with your review today! Well well well, this certainly was an impressive piece. I found it quite impressive that you managed to fit this all ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, Literature Re: Generational Education in To Kill a Mockingbird

    Hey there Makriege, Dogs here with your review today. Ok, so Evil really nailed all the grammatical errors and what not so I won't touch on those. Although I would ...

    Feb 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Part 1: The Battle

    "a million little alarms inside his head" Great start to a piece, way to draw the readers attention in. But try to omit all useless words whenever you can. Try ...

    Feb 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Caring = Death

    "teach me hot now to give a f***" I think you mean "how" instead of "hot" here. Also I feel like this phrase of "giving a f***" is a little ...

    Feb 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: The Gods of Love

    YAAAYYY MORE GREEK GODS AND MYTHS AND HISTORY! Well actually Roman this time... but ya know. Rather similar. Can we be friends? Please. Any who, lovely piece of work here, ...

    Feb 14, 2013


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