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Hey there sunxkissedxme! I'm here to review. So here it goes. First off, I really liked this. I was realistic and blunt, and showed your true views on modern society. ...

Hiya, Bhayden71297! I love this so much. Amazing narrative poetry! Great job. This review is probably going to mostly repeat GeeLyria and whitewolfpuppy, but I wanted to review this wonderful ...

Hey there, EnchantedPanda! First off, I loved this so much. I usually steer away from poems with rhymes, but it worked so perfectly here. Bravo! Absolutely wonderful job here. Your ...

Hai LiseyLu. This is a good poem, but there are a few things holding it back from its full potential. First of all, you used nice descriptive words, but some ...

Hiya vampyIrishgirl! This was heartbreaking, but beautiful. It's a good poem. One thing I must say is make sure you use those apostrophes in words like "I'm." Also, the shape ...

Hey there, Toe. First off, I love this so much I can't even express it. This is a truly stunning piece of work. Amazing job darling. It's dark, breath taking, ...

Hai there, Sionarama. First off, this isn't a haiku, but you have already been told that. :P Second, I absolutely adored this. Truly. I loved it so much. I read ...

Hai there, Demoness. I liked this a lot. It was very descriptive and it drew me in and kept me interested. The entire style and idea of this piece is ...

Hai there, Dreamwalker. Well, I liked the idea of this a lot. But I believe you have some editing to do. First of all, no capitalization? Also you have lots ...

Hai there unmarkedterritory. I have to say, I found this absolutely stunning. Its a real understanding of life. Your style is great and you portrayed emotion really well. I enjoyed ...