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Greetings! I really really love what you have written here. You got one paragraph describing how the girl feels and then another about the boy. I really enjoyed that. The ...

Hello, Valerie here to review! So I really loved this piece because I can just feel some of the emotion and I can tell this is really personal because of ...

Hello! I was going to go to sleep but I figured a little story would help me sleep. I absolutely love what you've written here, it's realistic, it's inspiring. A ...

Hello! Here for a review! So, this is a very beautiful poem and I just love the imagery you used in it. It was very vivid and really there. I ...

Hello! Here to give a great review on review day! So I really like this topic and what you've said. I think you can make it better than it already ...

Hi! I think this could totally be a song, It's got the basic fundaments of a song! It's really flirty and carefree! And I like that! We all love a ...

Hello! I've been reviewing all types of poems today and this is by far the best, there's one nitpick and then I'm all admiring and complementing. The "anyway", I think ...

Hi! Man this is great. I love it. I cannot stop laughing at this brilliant parody of Anaconda. I knew it was going to be a parody of it from ...

Hi! Wow, this is amazing. I really enjoyed this satirical poem of your. I cannot point out any flaws, I think it's flawless. I love the crossed out words. It ...

Hello, I really like this poem because everyone can relate to it and I think thats really important when writing. People need to relate to what you're saying in order ...

disheartedallure is here to review this masterpiece! I really like this a lot. Not because It's romantic and all that but because it flows well! At least to me it ...

Hey! me again! well I LOVE this poem too.(yes, I came back for more) I love how it flowed. The rhyme scheme and everything. I've never seen such a poem ...

oh and I absolutely loved how you capture the readers attention with the question. It's perfect, your poem is perfect

Hey there! This is my first review so just have some patience with me here. I liked how this poem flowed. It shows great meaning, I would love to see ...