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Rap of the River: Party Time.

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Kiss me slow, kiss me fast,

Give me kisses that I know will last,

Put your body on mine,

 we're one of a kind,

Feel my body heat,

And your heartbeat,

Loudly, loudly,

Mixing with the beat. 


Up, down, left, right, 

Come party with me all night,

Dance a little to the side,

And give me one hell of a ride! 



Dance, dance dance, dance, 

Let me slid my hands in your pants,

We'll see what kind of awesome things you hide,

In the darkest depths of a party-filled night. 


Kiss me hard, kiss me fast,

Give me kisses that'll knock me on my ass,

Hold me close, hold me tight,

Let me keep you up all night,

Make me feel alright,

Take my hands and hold 'em right. 


Slip your hands in mine, 

Dance to the rhythm in time, 

Grind against me all night long,

And we'll be going so strong,

Singing our songs,

And doing no wrongs.


Hey! Look over here,

Get your butt in gear, 

And pull me near, 

 Tell me something I wanna hear! 


Don't stop laughing, don't stop smiling,

All the while it's the sun we're timing,

Gotta stay up till dawn shows up,

Then come back to my house and get a little luck,

You are just what I want, 

With everything you flaunt,

Lift up your shirt, take off your shoes, 

And you'll see I've got something to lose. 


Don't be shy, don't be coy,

I just wanna have a little fun, boy! 


Kiss me hard, kiss me fast,

Love me so I know we'll last, 

All I've ever wanted to do,

Damn! since I saw you,

Is go to town, so turn that frown upside down,

And let those saggy pants hit the g-g-ground! 


Show me what you got,

Better got a lot, 

I like my boys who like their toys, 

So come on then, make some noise, 

Let's fool around,

Go to town,

Get down, 

Wear my crown! 


Now, better listen close, 

'cause I'm the number one host,

I don't mean to boast,

But I win the most,

And all I really want is a piece of toast. 


Psyche! 

Get outta here,

Don't shed a tear,

Have a beer, 

Just kidding boy,

Get over here! 


Hold me close, hold me tight,

Kiss me fast, kiss me right,

Love me till my body bleeds, 

C'mon, boy, fulfill all my needs,

I know what you've got hiding under that hood,

And don't tell me you didn't know I would,

'cause I'm the best you've ever seen,

The best that's never been, 

And when I hit that scene,

You know I'm clean, 

Though my mind's on a lean,

I can guarantee,

Yeah,

I'm the mother-fucking queen. 


C R B W, 

Crazy rocking boy, 

I wanna get you, 

My new toy,

Smile that cute smirk,

You make me wanna J34K- (Jerk,)

-Away, from the crowd, 

They're much too loud, 

So, grab me by the hips, 

Here's a couple of tips, 

For later on tonight, 

It's gonna get hyped!  


Firstly, better come up close, 

Breath softly, then make the most- 

Of my- (pause) childish ways, 

Pull me close and we'll have fun for days! 


Secondly, you know what I like, 

Do what I want and you'll get a strike,

In my good books, 

And with just a look, 

I'll be on your hook. 



Third, but not the final,

All you gotta do is put on some vinyl, 

Yeah, you know what I mean,

(Put on some music,) and boy, it's a helluva scene,

Just bend right over and- 

take one for the team! 


Uh-huh uh-huh, yeah. That's right, 

The rules of the guide to pure delight.

Yeah! That's right, 

(Do what I want)and we'll stay up all night. 


Ready for the rest of my lesson?

Keep up, don't go regressing! 

If you wanna keep my attention, 

Then I'd best not forget to mention,

All You gotta do for number four,

Is come and take a knock at my door! 

Yeah, a little visit every now and then,

Will keep you in my loop, friend! 


Yeah, now for number five, 

Better pay attention n' stay alive,

My memory isn't as good as it used to be- 

Nah just kidding- PAY ATTENTION TO ME! 


With the fifth tip to keep me interested, 

You'll find my will is uncontested, 

If you wanna keep my love alive, 

You're gonna have to take a nose-dive! 


K.I.S.S.M.E, (spell it,) 

And you will set my heart free,

Doesn't it feel good,

'cause boy, you know it should,

Place your lips against mine,

And love me 'till the end of time,

Send my heart aflutter, and you and I both know,

That in my heart forever is where you'll go!


3,2,5,4,9,

You and me boy, we're one of a kind,

6,7,12,3,

Together forever is what I wanna be,

So hold me close, love me tight,

And I know everything is gonna be alright. 


Man, look at that, the sun is rising, 

And now I think that I'm surmising, 

And images comes to mind, 

Yes sir, it's mighty kind,

The party ends, 

Depart from ya friends,

Come with me for tonight,

And everything will be a delight! 


The parties at it's end, 

Dancing was a friend,

Yeah, yeah, I get it all, 

Better go home or else you're gonna fall,

In bed, that is. 


But if you ever need me, 

In your heart I'll always be,

Give me a call, or a just a shout,

And I'll take the fastest route. 


See you later, see you soon,

Boy you really make me swoon,

And tomorrow night when the sun hides again,

Yeah, that's right.... 


I'm gonna play with you and ya little friend. ;) 

(Again, all night long, 

With me and you-

We'll be going strong!) 

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Hi!
I think this could totally be a song, It's got the basic fundaments of a song! It's really flirty and carefree! And I like that! We all love a song that can get stuck in our head and make us feel carefree and this would be it! I really think it has potential! I loved the way it flowed, the rhymes and I could really imagine a melody going along with this!
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Psyche!

Get outta here,

Don't shed a tear,

Have a beer,

Just kidding boy,

Get over here!
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I really love this stanza. I think I just love how carefree and humorous it seems!
So good job! Don't stop writing because you do great!

Stay Awesome!
-Valerie

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Firepower13
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Wow! This could totally be lyrics to a song, like a rock ballad. It reminds me of a song called Paradise by the Dashboard Light.

I enjoyed how fast and upbeat this was. I wasn't expecting it, since most poems move a bit slower and some try to tackle very weighty topics, but yours wasn't like that. Thank you for that, because it was a very welcome change of pace.

I noticed that the verses vary in length, which isn't a terribly big deal in a regular poem, but when the tempo is a big deal, it can throw a wrench into the works. That's sort of all I want to point out, and to be honest, it's more for any future poems you might do than anything. This one reads just fine with no editing done.

Also, I love how you rhymed some very long words (uncontested and interested) without making these rhymes seem forced in any way.

Keep writing, please!

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2720002 Comment

WOW IT WAS AWESOME! THE BEAT JUST KEEPS ONE GOING! I SUGGEST YOU TAKE COMPOSING SONGS 'CAUSE YOU HAVE A GIFT! YOU ROCK!

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2720002 Comment

WOW IT WAS AWESOME!

First of all, I really enjoyed this!
The rhythm really was great.
So great that I thought I would maybe offer up my idea of this becoming a song?
It totally sounds like some thing some rockstar would sing... (not that I think it doesn't do good as a poem, it does really good ;) )
You definitely have talent, I wouldn't have the patience to write a poem so long))
Anyways, again, great job!

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farahmasud
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This poem has been crafted so beautifully. The rhyming and rhythm has been done with perfection.
Wow I'm really impressed. It was a fun read. Haven't read anything so fast paced yet so well written in a while.
Also, you have portrayed the imagery really well.
Kudos to you.
Hoping to read more of your poems.
And might I add, this could make a great song too. :D



Be happy, my friend; and if you obey me in this one request, remain satisfied that nothing on earth will have the power to interrupt my tranquility.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein