disheartedallure22
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Greetings! I really really love what you have written here. You got one paragraph describing how the girl feels and then another about the boy. I really enjoyed that. The ...
Dec 7, 2015
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Poetry » General, General
Re: Binge watching tv, or, How to move on with your life, or, A letter to my ex boyfriend
Hello, Valerie here to review! So I really loved this piece because I can just feel some of the emotion and I can tell this is really personal because of ...
Dec 29, 2014
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Hello! I was going to go to sleep but I figured a little story would help me sleep. I absolutely love what you've written here, it's realistic, it's inspiring. A ...
Dec 20, 2014
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Hello! Here for a review! So, this is a very beautiful poem and I just love the imagery you used in it. It was very vivid and really there. I ...
Nov 30, 2014
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Hello! Here to give a great review on review day! So I really like this topic and what you've said. I think you can make it better than it already ...
Nov 30, 2014
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Hi! I think this could totally be a song, It's got the basic fundaments of a song! It's really flirty and carefree! And I like that! We all love a ...
Nov 30, 2014
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Hello! I've been reviewing all types of poems today and this is by far the best, there's one nitpick and then I'm all admiring and complementing. The "anyway", I think ...
Nov 28, 2014
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Hi! Man this is great. I love it. I cannot stop laughing at this brilliant parody of Anaconda. I knew it was going to be a parody of it from ...
Nov 28, 2014
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Hi! Wow, this is amazing. I really enjoyed this satirical poem of your. I cannot point out any flaws, I think it's flawless. I love the crossed out words. It ...
Nov 28, 2014
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Hello, I really like this poem because everyone can relate to it and I think thats really important when writing. People need to relate to what you're saying in order ...
Nov 28, 2014
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disheartedallure is here to review this masterpiece! I really like this a lot. Not because It's romantic and all that but because it flows well! At least to me it ...
Nov 28, 2014
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Hey! me again! well I LOVE this poem too.(yes, I came back for more) I love how it flowed. The rhyme scheme and everything. I've never seen such a poem ...
May 29, 2014
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oh and I absolutely loved how you capture the readers attention with the question. It's perfect, your poem is perfect
May 29, 2014
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Hey there! This is my first review so just have some patience with me here. I liked how this poem flowed. It shows great meaning, I would love to see ...
May 15, 2014
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