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Hi! My name is Dianne and I am going to review your poem today. First of all, I like the rhyme scheme you are going with. It doesn’t really have ...

Hi! My name is Dianne and I’m going to review your poem today. First of all, I would like to acknowledge how amazing your opening line is! I am totally ...

Hi! My name is Dianne and I’m going to review your poem today. First off, you start out with a fantastic opening image. I also like that you kept the ...

Hi! My name is Dianne and I am going to review your poem :) First off, I thought your structure was an interesting choice and I like that you start ...

Hello! My name is Dianne and I am going to review your poem today! :) First off, did you mean to say “angle” or “angel”? I think it’s supposed to ...

Hello! My name is Dianne and I am going to review your poem today! :) First off, I thought it was kind of odd to say that six weeks have ...

Hello! My name is Dianne and I am here to review your poem! :) First off, I love that you wrote this almost like prose poetry. I’ve never heard of ...

Hello! My name is Dianne and I am going to review your poem. First, I don’t mean to get crazy grammatical with you but “Mexican” should be capitalized in the ...

Hello! My name is Diane and I’m just going to get right into my notes for your poem. :) The “blue candlelit eyes” line in the first stanza disrupts the ...

Hello! First things first, I like how you set up this poem. I love the direct images set up in the short sentences at the beginning and the tone you ...

Hi! To start off, I really want to tell you how much I admire your humor. This poem is very funny and even though it's a little crude, I really ...

Hi! To start off, I want to tell you how amazing this poem is. I was fascinated all the way through and I think you should definitely continue writing poetry ...

Hello! To start off, I'd like to say how I didn't except this poem to feel so pleasant and I'm glad that it does. As I was reading, I kept ...

Hi! First off I want to say that I loved how well you captured these images and scenes in such a concise manner. That's something I usually have a hard ...

Hi! To start off, you don’t really need those lines in between your stanzas unless you really want them there. I do have to say, though, that I love your ...