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I like it. Not my style but it has a very nice flow and thoughts.

Intresting. I like it. I used to be so into shape shifters when i was little.

So this poem is good but what i dont understand is when you say "Surely someone Or Someone" should it be "Surely someone, Or something? or does Someone count for ...

Thy means the not your it wont make sense to say "Inside your broken body of me" when it is not you that has this pain but the one who ...

thanks! i love yoda

Well this is probably the most intresting poem i have read all day. I wont say I love it, but i sure aint going to say i hated it! Let ...

This was only an idea its not really a chapter it did say prologue on it right?

thanks!

oops sorry my mistake. the part in italics is a vision she had before we go into the real action.

Ill see if some of my frineds will do it. I have a good tune in mind

This poem made me cry, cause that is pretty much how my mom left me behind. I can understand the depth in this poem even though it might not hae ...

Awww man. With that first sentence, I was screaming my head off in disgust! I mean its good, but a head in a microwave? Ew ew ew!!!! Other than taht ...

This is so lyrical. I can put this into a song with my cello and a couple good friends. Youre pretty good at this poem, but tone down a bit. ...

This is pretty good Rainbow. One things I have to nit pick at is when you said "So, on I ran threw the hall way," It is supposed to be ...

This story man... It has an amazing tie to it. Attracted to girls, but ends up kissing a somewhat hot young man at the end, it puts such a twist ...