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Oh that great Liz( i only read it because it's by you) I don't normally read romance, but what the hey my life a romantic puzzle lol.

*Laugh my blo*dy ass off* God that's so funny :D

Yay i'm brave *goes to read it* Not bad erm Satan is does not have two left feet, i do, no wait do i *checks* Nope oh well still can't ...

Awww that is sweet and it's what i'm feeling with someone else, but it has no imaingery.

This is a great poem and it's so true that what a dream like. Also it may be better as a song.

Okay that poem in another langauge made my day.

That good Liz, and not as bad as everyone think, well done. What about calling it My Sweetheart.

Okay the first line has been used over and over, maybe think of something original.

Okay i'll forget i saw that that i think.

God that is powerful poem, i could almost see the scene.

Finally i can be bothered to notice a mistake, Pierrce is spelt Pierce.

This is great Liz i really like this poem. PS How many Poems you write, for i'm going to kill myself if i keep staring at this damn computer screen, ...

It was really good Liz, and Emma right don't put your self down i'm always telling you not to do that.

This is a good poem Liz, it seemed like it came right from the heart.

I read this, and i can't say much more you must have been angry fro some reason.