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Hi Deleted12 for a quick review..! ;) So..I liked most of this poem....I liked how it quickly switched from different scene's cuz that is good because it is more entertaining ...

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*what to write about too!

This was an interesting poem! And a good idea as to why to write about too! I liked how some of it rymed..(And i know that i can't spell rymed ...

Hi Deleted12 here for a quick review! I really enjoyed this poem! My favorite part was where it said: ''The sand scotched her toes'' and then, ''And they walked into ...

That's a very good poem and it seems like a complacated think to write about but i really liked it! Good Job! ;)

Hi I really liked this poem cuz only very few people seem to notice this...so..yeh Nice poem! :D

Nice job! It's no biggie that you didn't add the stanzas or line I don't feel the same as Skorlir (ha) but that was a good poem! ;) It sounded ...

I liked the poem! :D

Nice work..;)

I meant that MY illistration was really lame..;)

Woah...that. was. an. AWESOME!!!! Poem!!! :D That was super good! I loved the way you wrote it about it like how, what you write about on the paper-affects the ways ...

Wow So you posted this 4 hours ago, and no comments?!?!! (haha) Ya know, this poem is really good! What I really liked about it-is that I think you described ...

Oh and David Tennet or Matt smith or whoever played in that one show has GOTTA read this! lol

That was a super awesome thing to write about,like, who would have thought of writing a script?? I didn't get through the whole thing...but that's just cuz I have a ...